Are you continuing this story? I love it by the way an don't let any one get you down its great the way your writing it.

Your story's great but sometimes you've written he and not she or Harry and not Charlie, just check it before you publish

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Err.. You said in your AN that you didn't want
to write a story that replaces 'he' with 'she' - but this is the closest thing to the original book i've ever read... Like copied word for word.. :s

Great story so far... though you did put Harry in by mistake in Piers statement about Charlie talking to the snake.

shouldn't it be your a witch instead of your a wizard other than that great job

Fred's gonna be Charlie's boyfriend from the way you were doing it I thought it would be Ron

I like the idea of your fic, although I think Charlie hugging Ron goodnight and things already is pretty fast for them to be that close.

You could also extend Charlie to Charolette to be more formal. Is also the more feminine version of Charles or Charlus, which was James Potter's father and Charlie's grandfather. Lily is a good middle name, since Harry James was a boy it makes sense for Lily for a girl.

Looking forward to more and seeing how it diverges more from cannon. I wouldn't kill either twin, I'd pick Percy, Ginny, or Charlie if you had to have a Weasley die in the war.

You accidently put the next four paragraphs, un-paraphrased, at the end. Not that I mean to be mean or anything, just... accidents happen.

Charlie Harry Potter... okay ring to it, but maybe it could be more along the lines of Charlie Lily Potter, because Harry's in the books was Harry James Potter.

great! love a female charlie!

This is so cool. I've actually thought about writing a story like this one, and it's probably way better than what I could've come up with. Cheers!

Just remember to recheck to see if you're replacing the 'he's' and 'Harry's' through and through. Again, it's otherwise PERFECT.

Um... I've done it before, but maybe copying and pasting books then paraphrasing it isn't all that good if you don't check it twice. Because instead of 'Charlie' on the last sentence Piers said, it was still 'Harry'. Other then that, it was amazingly original.