Chapter4 thair are 2chapters only!

If you could add more detail and slow it down some so I'm not left confused...and feeling very rushed

I m sorry to hear ALLAH bless him

my condolences

Sorry for your loss dude my grandma died two month ago so I hope I can relate.

Wish your grandfather well, and look forward to the next chapter.

Good Luck with everything. :)

I hope your grandmother feels better really soon

Could go 1 chapter each story in a cycle.

I'm happy that updated this story can't wait to read what you have next.

A handy ability for jinchuuriki's is the ability to be completely immune to mind control and to an extent seals. Dr. Gero has no idea he has awakened a warrior of the past to fight once again and the first thing he's going to do make Dr. Gero wish he was never born.

Love the story, it show great promise, and update soon

Sweet I sure know that Sakura is very pissed right now at what has happened to Naruto lol shocked she was not brought back with the Edo.

I like that you're fan fiction is original

Hmm interesting although I really hope hinata does die in the manga die hard naruhina fan here :p all in all a very good story

he has enough control to speak to them at least at the moment to tell them what do and to dodge.