things finally getting better, finally. so could you please, continue? your writing, though there are some spelling mistake here and there, are mostly good. The way you elaborate the conflict is so good it pains me as I read, as it shold. So, continue if you may? And pls they deserve all the happiness there is so pls stop their suffering. Thank you for writing this!

why are you making them suffer for so long...

i love it so so much

I love it! please update soon

this is sooo good! Please update again

This is so amazing!
I do hope you will update again

amazing story! i cannot wait to see what will happen next

i love it! please update soon

Please update

Will Sasuke find out about His Mom misson

does Sasuke know about His Mom misson

ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh. you. cannot. possible. stop. here. I stayed up all night reading your story and I must say, it is one of the best I've read on here so far! Please, please update!
Hope you have a wonderful easter!

Ok so I like the story so far. It also has a good plot, however, I think you meant "onigiri," also...some of your grammer was actually distracting me from the story, so I am giving you an example below:
1. There: Sasuke is over there.
2. They're: they are sparring.
3. Their: Naruto went to their house. And it's "rogue" not "rouge.I hope I don't sound like a snarky asshat, because I really do like this fiction so far, it's pretty good! Can't wait to read the other chapters!

Finally, there is progress between Sasuke and Sakura! Haha, I have to admit, I disliked Sakura in the beginning just because she didn't want to accept any help, but then again, I understand why she got defensive. Fantastic story and I can't wait to see what will happen with this whole Yuu situation. Keep up the great work and can't wait for more updates!

love it!