Waaaaaah!

I think it's east.

Oh noooo... I get engrossed in my music too! *Makes fake scared face, then bursts into laughter*
But seriously, this is good.

Sorry to be evil but I now hate u

U hope we like it!? How could anyone possibly like this?

P.S. Your good at writing but you don't have to kill everyone's favorite characters to prove it

Will you do more? Like having a bit with the ones left behind (Gilian, Horace, Alyss)?
Poor Halt. But he's with Will now so I guess it's all good.

As much as I hate the fact that halt died it was a nicely rounded ending :)
I hope the genovasan died
Wow that's pretty harsh haha
Start something new. Maybe write a full length story. I would read it
Xx

Thats so sad! I am crying now!

*sniff* Will T_T

Awww sooo cute :) but tear tear for Halt
Yes will will always be his naive little apprentice no matter what
You should add a part about will being like a son to Halt :) and maybe have all those things on his gravestone: husband, father?, son, brother
Just a suggestion :)

Wow this is really good.

Noooooo will is dead *sobs* but you should write a chapter about halt getting revenge