Please consider writing the sequel to this.

Brilliant can't wait for the sequel thanks:-)

Wow! Just wow! This was a crazy and amazing story! I can't wait to read your next one! I'll be waiting :)

Just had to say I love the Cover Photo! It is so adorable!

I did enjoy the story. Thanks for sharing it.

I must have missed it, but what happened to Alec?

Interesting twist about the properties of hybrid blood chemistry, but I still cannot fathom the overall turn of events regarding the brainwashed Cullens. True to form though, Edward is still misjudging the situation. If any vampire left alive is still a threat, Chelsea is probably it.

It was exciting, I'll give you that. Jacob & Rose make a great team. Bella can be a real bitch, but we all knew that already.

I guess I don't know where I thought this story was going, but this definitely is not it.

Frankly, the whole point of the story is lost if these characters all survived. Not that Carlisle and Jasper wouldn't want them all to go on with their lives, but this is ridiculous.

Damn. I liked Georgia.

When will all the killing end?

The plan? Burn it all down, and then take a long vacation. Obviously Renesme will convince Quinn to bust them out of the dungeon, and they will be long gone. They can go live in the jungle with Nahuel & his aunt. It would be better for everybody if they never know that Bella was even there.

Sorry, I don't like that at all. I makes no sense. Of all people, Bella should have been immune to mental compulsion and she could not have possibly known anything about the sanctuary. Maybe I am missing something, but Alice is the only one who could have seen where they were hiding without seeing it in person while still being vulnerable to brainwashing by the Volturi. Even Jade could have possibly foreseen the general location that the search parties would be likely to be found, and Jane has leverage against her. Bella, on the other hand, has nothing to lose at this point and there is no way that she would bow down to Jane under any circumstances.

What would be the point of turning a six year old? That is dangerously close to immortal children territory, and I imagine that some of the Volturi would have a problem with that regardless of who currently occupies the throne.

I am crushed that it was Jade and not Alice, but I can find no fault in the progress of the plot. I should have made the connection instantly when Jade was introduced as clairvoyant, and of course Jane would take advantage of her daughter like that. All that matters now is that both girls live long enough for the rescue to arrive.