LOVED THIS STORY! I was up so late reading it last night 3 Absolutely wonderful.

This is brilliant. Dang.

Great story. You did a great job at staying true to the show, as it did read just like an episode. I would like to see it on screen. I would love to read more of your fan fiction and your novel. And if you are looking for more fan fiction i'd love a story where 11 comes back to see rose & meta, see your take on the love triangle.

You did a fantastic job with the Doctor's "voice", I could "hear" David Tennant's voice and personality shining through as I read; fantastic job! Thank you for writing and sharing! : )

Very enjoyable! Loved it (_)/ good luck with your future writings

Brilliant story! Fantastically written and a really thoughtful plot - I loved it and can't wait to read the sequel!

Lovely! Really great story :)

You are brilliant!

Hi! Ok. Weeelll... I think you should have said something along the lines of "He isn't usually like this" when Tony has an Avalon fit thingy at the beginning. I got the impression that Tony having screaming sobbing things was usual, and that made me not want to carry on reading it. Fay was a REALLY good idea for the alien. I've never thought of faeries being aliens, and to me its an awesome idea (Though I don't know if thats just me). The Doctor is a tiny bit OOC if your trying to get him just like the original, but he just turned human, and is now without a TARDIS and having to adjust and he has got bits of Donna in him (I would personally love it if he randomly comes out with Donnaness) so I personally think it doesn't matter. You've done a brilliant job (Doesn't really sound right but oh well.) and good luck with writing your Novel!
TimTam

Sucha great RoseXTen2 fic! I love the going Ironside plot arc! Plus the writing is fantastic!

Oh, your novel was amazing in every way, I really did feel as if I were watching the show, and that was fantastic!, I wish I could do something like this, thanks for doing something so great, I see you did a sequel, I'll read it right now, and of course this will go to my favorites like its brilliant author.

I like this first chaper of the story and I'm looking forward to read the rest. :-)

I really enjoyed thi story, and look forward to reading the next!

I think it would be cool if they met up with alternate Jack sometime in the story, although that one wouldn't be immortal, would he?

This was a wonderful read. I loved how I was able to hear each character's voice in my head just by the way you wrote them speaking. I'm going to have to go read you're other stuff now :)