Oh my that was steamy! Good thing that storm made Emma and Killian have to share a tent together.

Overprotective daddy!Charming has a special place in my heart. I love when he gets in that mode. lol.

I enjoyed reading this!

This story is lovely - one of my early favorites when I first began reading "Once" fics. When I came back to re-read it recently I realized that I somehow never reviewed it. I'm fixing that right now! :) Though there are many fics with Killian and Emma "hooking up" while in Neverland, I love the more heartfelt, hopeful, and deeper nature of this story. Their whole conversation in the tent beforehand is lovely - both the way they tease and banter and his admission of how she brought life back into his life the first moment their eyes met, and what that means to her when he says it. Just wonderful - such a good read!

Wonderful and passionate one shot. I think that was perfect for those two if Emma allowed herself to. {Smiles} Excellent possibilities.

I adored it! Wish it lasted longer ;)

*giggle* Yes, that would be how Killian would act :)

awesome i loved it good job

Omg so cute, he really sweet! Wish that happend in the show. You are an amasing writer!

Amazing! Great writing! Just what I needed!

Loved this! Everything was great: the dialogue, the love scene, the chemistry :D

They are ADORABLE! It's passionate and sexy and beautiful, but also HAPPY! You can just feel the joy they feel reading this. There is a comfort and a sense of coming home and it is no less hot and steamy. Just wonderful.

Hahaha love this

Great story! You should do another one where its the next time and he takes his time with her

Loved it ! So good your a great writer - you should continue haha

I wish there was more!

sexy storm sex and overprotective charming?! I love it! Fantastic update!