It made me cry. To sweet for much words. Great job

YOU JUST BROKE MY HEART IM CRYING!

Short, but sweet. Or bittersweet. Or just bitter. Nice little shot of melancholy.

Oh gosh, now I ship these two. This was the most beautiful thing I've ever read.

Wow. What a sad and heartrending story. I really liked it and really like your writing style so much. You really captured the emotions of both Leo and Karai as Karai lay dying, and that last line was just so sad. Nicely done on this.

The Bubbly One,
Shell

This was beautiful. You have managed to capture so much in so little space-that is the sign of a truly talented artist. The concept of Leonardo and his brothers aging at a slower rate than humans is surely an interesting one, and I was delighted to see you take that approach here. The dialogue between Leo and Karai is absolutely touching-the back and forth of two individuals who have shared their life's journey together.

Rarely am I moved by fanfiction. You managed to move me. Excellent work!

This was so beautiful. Ah, dammit. I shouldn't have read this today. I'm feeling down and this fuels that melancholy spirit of mine like nothing else. It is such a simple idea, and yet, I've never seen it written before. Of course he would outlive her if a violent death didn't take him first. I'm so glad you made them lovers, though. At least he'll have his memories of being with her. Rakked, you really have a lot of talent. I'm going to hop on over to stealthystories and recommend this one to the TMNT group there as well.

Really, so lovely. It deserves more attention and you need to write more TMNT stories! XD

very interesting!
(which tmnt series is it based on?)

The imagery is so poetic and heart breaking. Love is transient and fleeting.

*cries brokenly...for the third time*