Hey, if you want, I can be a beta for you because I noticed that there are multiple spelling errors in most of the chapters that may confuse the reader. If you want to talk to me about being a beta for you or whatever, you can dm me. Ja ne!

I've enjoyed your story and hope that you will continue to update

So I assume this story is dead and not a harem like it should be ?

An IQ of 110 is actually a very average IQ a genius kid wouls have an IQ of at least 130.

Please continue.

yo this a is a classic Naruto becomes snake sage fanatic homes.

Update please!

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Your story lacks proper plot and arrangement judging from your writings it can only be concluded that you are still a novice and it doesn't takes a genius to know that you keep writing the first thing that comes to your head which by the way is not a good trait of a writer you need to be more thoughtful when writing a story and also learn to prepare your ideals before hand

So sad when a good story dies

stop with that dumb che

Dcrf

Please update this story, it's really good

What Imagined naruto wearing was a mix between virgils and dantes outfit from the dmc series

ubdate pls