i think i will come back when this is not in first person.

Interesting story good job!

Great story, update soon!

Please continue this story!

This story turned out to be much more interesting than I thought it would be. Well done.

Thank you for the new chapter! :D

Seriously?! They managed just fine in canon! But nooo...THEY HAVE TO GO TO ANOTHER FREAKING WORLD TO GET MONEY. BAKAS! DON'T MESS WITH OTHER WORLD'S AFFAIRS. If I could, I would grab the four ninjas by the scruff of there necks, and kick their behinds back to Konoha, and lock that world up tight so they can never go to other worlds, and subsequently, so other worlds can't reach them. Saiyuki is an exception since she has to do a mission for a god. A GOD. These four Konoha shinobi have no such missions. YOU DO NOT MESS WITH OTHER WORLDS. ARGH.

Aaaaand! Her cover is blown!
A time paradoxa inducing conversation is coming up!

Great chapter and story so far please continue this story.

Great chapter and story so far please continue this story

Interesting indeed!
And dangerous too.

Ho ? And who Tom think that it will be easy to kiss ? Mary ? ;p
Update soon and good luck with the next chapter !
Sorry if my english is bad it's not my native language.

"'Oh, why don't you kiss her? If she does die of a heart attack, that means I wont have to deal with her.'
"'You say that as if it is so easy to do'
"'Saa...Who knows?' I mused smiling sadly...It's so easy to poison someone..."

You know... Somehow, I doubt Tom was referring to murder. (Personally, I think he was talking about the kissing suggestion)

Hm, interesting developments so far. Keep up the great work!

Awesome chapter!