Reviews for One Wrong Move-Remix
Lauridc13 chapter 1 . 4/9
good one

thanks,
Lauri
callyaoi chapter 1 . 4/27/2017
Bonjour j'espère que nous aurons une suite à cette histoire même si cela fait longtemps que vous n'avez pas publier.
burito 89 chapter 1 . 3/19/2016
Who deleted your writings?
Guest chapter 1 . 9/15/2015
Why did you delete two of your really cool story?
Jade Rojo chapter 1 . 8/15/2015
wow !
nirma chapter 1 . 9/21/2014
please please ! can you continue the story :))) i love it so much
Amy chapter 1 . 6/16/2014
Thank you thank you
Handmaiden of Foamy chapter 1 . 5/9/2014
-just starts laughing-

That was hilarious. I kinda could see a sequel coming from this, Asami thinking about the fun of that night and seeking him out or something.
psynekopath chapter 1 . 1/9/2014
Asami you lucky dog! I liked this version better, really you're so good at this stuff. Poor Aki even I got scared from Asami while reading it haha.
Absalon95 chapter 1 . 1/4/2014
hahahahah awesome. it would be great if it had another chapter at least.
but still it was super!
Windying chapter 1 . 11/11/2013
Please continue this goddess!
Pyrane chapter 1 . 10/20/2013
Nice ;D
But what happen to the real one ? lost ?
See you !

***Pyrane***
Kichou chapter 1 . 9/29/2013
I wonder why Asami was there in the first place and what happened to that stripper anyway? Nice story, hon.
Pombella4 chapter 1 . 9/29/2013
Great story! He somehow always find pleasure in something he didn't want in the first place but makes the best of in the end!
Jhaydren chapter 1 . 9/29/2013
This one's good! XD
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