Reviews for The Fervid Defense Protocol
LadyStark27 chapter 1 . 10/8/2018
This has been one of my absolute favorites that you have done. Awesome story! ️
Deacog chapter 1 . 6/12/2017
Why haven't more people favorited this?! It's a work of art
icecatfire chapter 1 . 4/3/2016
*the attacks on jarvis and tony* JARVIS, TONY! someone help!

"the man's finger squeezes the trigger, barrel pointed at U's body."

*snarling* if they even SCRATCHED him i WILL find a fucking way to slaughter them. i don't care if i have to bash my way into their universe IT'S HAPPENING!

*mark 43 coming back on* YEEEES! COME ON YOU BEAUTIFUL THING WHOOP THEIR ASSES! awwww DUM-E is helping the suit. *hugs*

*cackles* i can't WAIT to see how they get them back! :D AND YES I'M PISSED. what the fuck hell did tony do to them. i know what he did to killen, or however you spell that i'm to mad to care, but what did he do to THOSE asshats?!

O.O.. JARVIS BLEW UP THE HOUSE! *laughs in shock* now THAT'S dedication/love xD

"the bots look at it, cocking their heads, and chirp in unison." *squees* i simply CAN'T get over how protective they are towards tony! *huggling all*

*mark 43 tearing open mark 44's pod like sardine can* *whoop!* GO MARK 43!

*jarvis getting frustrated*... awwwwww jarv *hugs*

*U comforting unconscious tony* :') don't worry U tony will be FINE... he will right? :(

*DUM-E and mark 43's argument* *giggles* for some reason that sounds absolutely adorable. :)

:O... mark 43 blew itself up for tony... *hugs mark 43*

this is just an educated guess but if *I* was tony waking up, i would be a mixture of anger, worry and thankfulness; after finding out what my kids, if i had any, did for me. :')

oh, sorry i'm supposed to be reviewing throughout this whole thing. but i keep getting caught up in the tension. what keeps going through my head this whole time is "WHERE THE *FUCK* ARE THE OTHER AVENGERS!" then seconds after THAT a MUCH calmer thought of "they don't know tony's in trouble, it's not they're fault" appears. will keep adding on as the thoughts appear. :)

"several miles, and one they must take" yes, take it, TAKE IT NOW! .

*at the gas station* -_-.. where the FUCK are all the people. this is getting VERY frustration, they WILL get help EVENTUALLY right?!

*tony waking up*...*SCREAMS* "TONY'S AWAKE, TONY'S AWAKE, TONY'S AWAKE!" :D *hugs tony*

*tony passes back out*
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! WAKE UP DAMN YOU, YOUR BABIES NEED YOUR HELPPPPPPPPPPPPP!

*breaths* ok... i'm calm now.

"call rhodey," YES, that's BRILLIANT! i LOVE you jarvis!

*rhodey comes* *drops to ground* THANK bloody GOD. that was frustrating as hell and HARD on the nerves.

*breaths* tony's ok.

*final thoughts?* i FUCKING LOVED THIS, that's what.
LaylanatorXVII chapter 1 . 1/23/2015
Attackers beware, for BAMF!Dummy and You wield the fire extinguisher and squeegee of justice! This was amazing. I did get frustrated because I was actually FEELING the trapped, closed-in sensation that J.A.R.V.I.S. was feeling... It was killing me... You are spectacular. You managed to make me FEEL what J.A.R.V.I.S. felt. Favoriting this, bro. Favoriting it NOW.
Guest chapter 1 . 10/29/2014
*beams*
Silvara chapter 1 . 10/1/2013
Very well written. Deep, clever, long, easy reading, not rounded enough as I would have liked, but the tough edge of the end show the masculine blend of the whole story.
MaiWishes chapter 1 . 9/27/2013
Excellent! I hope you have many more genius AI and bots ideas to come x) i love them too