| Reviews for The Fervid Defense Protocol |
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LadyStark27 chapter 1 . 10/8/2018 This has been one of my absolute favorites that you have done. Awesome story! ️ |
Deacog chapter 1 . 6/12/2017 Why haven't more people favorited this?! It's a work of art |
icecatfire chapter 1 . 4/3/2016 *the attacks on jarvis and tony* JARVIS, TONY! someone help! "the man's finger squeezes the trigger, barrel pointed at U's body." *snarling* if they even SCRATCHED him i WILL find a fucking way to slaughter them. i don't care if i have to bash my way into their universe IT'S HAPPENING! *mark 43 coming back on* YEEEES! COME ON YOU BEAUTIFUL THING WHOOP THEIR ASSES! awwww DUM-E is helping the suit. *hugs* *cackles* i can't WAIT to see how they get them back! :D AND YES I'M PISSED. what the fuck hell did tony do to them. i know what he did to killen, or however you spell that i'm to mad to care, but what did he do to THOSE asshats?! O.O.. JARVIS BLEW UP THE HOUSE! *laughs in shock* now THAT'S dedication/love xD "the bots look at it, cocking their heads, and chirp in unison." *squees* i simply CAN'T get over how protective they are towards tony! *huggling all* *mark 43 tearing open mark 44's pod like sardine can* *whoop!* GO MARK 43! *jarvis getting frustrated*... awwwwww jarv *hugs* *U comforting unconscious tony* :') don't worry U tony will be FINE... he will right? :( *DUM-E and mark 43's argument* *giggles* for some reason that sounds absolutely adorable. :) :O... mark 43 blew itself up for tony... *hugs mark 43* this is just an educated guess but if *I* was tony waking up, i would be a mixture of anger, worry and thankfulness; after finding out what my kids, if i had any, did for me. :') oh, sorry i'm supposed to be reviewing throughout this whole thing. but i keep getting caught up in the tension. what keeps going through my head this whole time is "WHERE THE *FUCK* ARE THE OTHER AVENGERS!" then seconds after THAT a MUCH calmer thought of "they don't know tony's in trouble, it's not they're fault" appears. will keep adding on as the thoughts appear. :) "several miles, and one they must take" yes, take it, TAKE IT NOW! . *at the gas station* -_-.. where the FUCK are all the people. this is getting VERY frustration, they WILL get help EVENTUALLY right?! *tony waking up*...*SCREAMS* "TONY'S AWAKE, TONY'S AWAKE, TONY'S AWAKE!" :D *hugs tony* *tony passes back out* NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! WAKE UP DAMN YOU, YOUR BABIES NEED YOUR HELPPPPPPPPPPPPP! *breaths* ok... i'm calm now. "call rhodey," YES, that's BRILLIANT! i LOVE you jarvis! *rhodey comes* *drops to ground* THANK bloody GOD. that was frustrating as hell and HARD on the nerves. *breaths* tony's ok. *final thoughts?* i FUCKING LOVED THIS, that's what. |
LaylanatorXVII chapter 1 . 1/23/2015 Attackers beware, for BAMF!Dummy and You wield the fire extinguisher and squeegee of justice! This was amazing. I did get frustrated because I was actually FEELING the trapped, closed-in sensation that J.A.R.V.I.S. was feeling... It was killing me... You are spectacular. You managed to make me FEEL what J.A.R.V.I.S. felt. Favoriting this, bro. Favoriting it NOW. |
Guest chapter 1 . 10/29/2014 *beams* |
Silvara chapter 1 . 10/1/2013 Very well written. Deep, clever, long, easy reading, not rounded enough as I would have liked, but the tough edge of the end show the masculine blend of the whole story. |
MaiWishes chapter 1 . 9/27/2013 Excellent! I hope you have many more genius AI and bots ideas to come x) i love them too |