Don't know who you are and don't care what you did :) It's a good story and I will read whatever you have, because you are a good writer

Nice, heartfelt moment between the two. :) Joel's not too good when it comes to comforting someone, but I think he did a pretty decent job consoling Ellie. At first, I thought she was thinking about how the surgery didn't happen to her at the end of the game. Phew, but she's just thinking of that monster, I mean, not that that's a pleasant thing to think about either. Great to see more 'Last of Us' work from you. :)

HOOOOLY CRAP: that is EXACTLY how Joel and Ellie would have a deep conversation!

Call yourself a hammer, cause you NAILED IT!

(haha, I suck at making puns)

;D GOOD JOB! know need to be sorry people are busy.:)

You're writing is so awesome :) I always enjoy reading it.