super great! please update soon xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

Thank you so much for writing and sharing this story. I love it! :)
I love the idea of Carlisle having a real daughter, even though he doesn't know about her yet. I believe he would have been an amazing father!
I hope you continue writing as I am really looking forward to more of this story. I really want to read about Willow finally meeting Carlisle, though I understand that it could be a while before this happens, but I can't wait! I don't know if you are planning to have her end up with Jasper as he is listed as one of the characters of this story, but if so I wholeheartedly approve as I love his character:D

Oh and I am assuming that Willows daughter is Bella Swans descendent, for I believe she was after all named after a grandmother who's name was Isabella. But I'm looking forward to however your story places out.

Good luck and once more thank you for the time and effort you put into this!

Ariana

Nice to see an older story being updated again. Will be looking forward to more when you have it ready for us. Thank you.

Fantastic re-write...though, opulent Willow and Paige now be stronger as they are newborns? So I would think that the two of them would be able to over power both William and Victor?

Looking forward to reading more, love to read more about Andrew and Sarah and of course Isabella. What are Andrew's and Sara's reaction to finding that their family have all been killed with Willow and Paige missing?

Wow... Congratulations, this is one of the most beautifully written stories I have read on Fanfic. I have had this story "flagged" to be read but kept putting it off. This story is so heartfelt, so real I could envision each you were writing.

Looking forward to reading more, wanting to know what will happen to Paige and Willow. How will Andrew and Sarah cope with the loss of so many loved ones? And what do Isabella? Lucy, what ever became of her? And of course Carlise?

Looking forward to your next update

Omg I love this story its great and I cried at the end such a beautiful ending I'm sad that it has to end but glad there suffering id over. Loved loved it.

Please update soon

Please keep writing that last chapter actually made me cry a little

Amazing as alwats you write like a pro. Your storys always fasinate me and paint pictures in my head with your discription xx keep going x

Update soon!

Another amazing chapter keep it up :-) xx

Congratulations for your friend! Loved this chapter. I hope Paige does make it to the birth!

This story is absolute perfection! You have created original characters that are compelling, and a storyline that all readers can enjoy and take interest in. I was afraid as I started reading this that Willow would be changed into a Cold One while in London, and then it would flash forward to meeting the present-day Cullen clan. While there is nothing wrong with that, it has been done before, and I'm thrilled with the little universe you have created. I have become emotionally invested in this story and it's characters. It is just my own personal opinion, but I feel it would be tragic to turn Willow into a vampire after all she has gone through. If you wanted to incorporate Carlisle into this story, maybe you could have a descendent of Willow's run into him? Just a suggestion.

Your chapters just get better and better :) I'd love to see Carlisle make an appearance.

Love it, this story is great. It's probably the only really good story I have found, where Carlisle has a child as a human. Keep up with the good work, I wait anxiously for the next up date.

Shakia-illanious09