(*q*) this was such a good story :I its what i was hoping for during the movie :DDD

Good job! I love the way you formated the fic, with memories interspersed between the scene.

This was very touching. There was the odd spelling mistake here and there, and it would have been awesome to have translations of the Vulcan you used, but otherwise, an amazing story which I think I shall add to my head canon. :D