Jesus this was absolutely fantastic. I enjoyed this story from start to finish, and I really hate that there's only one review! Thank you for writing this, seriously! I really didn't expect the slash seeing as how I skipped right over the author's notes, but boy was I pleasantly surprised!
As stated, you captured them perfectly! Write more! XD

Dude, this was undeniably brilliant. You captured the persona of Paxton Fettle's murderous yet seemingly benevolent in his family passion. His words were suitable enough for an actual script of FEAR. And Point man, for once we look on the inside and understand his emotions more so than anxiety or fear (which is our own emotions while playing)

Well done.