You're the man Oran.

If you ever start writing again you have to write a sequel to this story

oh my. This is HOT ! although I didnt expect Martin still being an exotic dancer at 27 years old, I imagine he would be a lot younger, and at this age he was already a cop. Details, I guess! Thanks for posting !

This is so cute!

yea i agree, it would be interesting if following this they met up whether it be in passing or years later when they meet in the mma gym while he is undercover as jason wyler

Loved this fic. Would really like to see what happens when the meet again a few years later!

You have to write how they react when they see each other again, years later, whilst undercover! This fic was soooooo good...I love it and I'd love to hear more xxxxxxx

Please write more for this story ! AMAZING :)

I really loved this. I like the idea of Deeks freeing her from Jacks problems.

love it great job

So good i want more.

This is absolutely beautiful. Beautifully written and just as easily to imagine this two perfect strangers meeting and having that impact in their lives. Just wish for a sequel four years later. That would have been the perfect continuation from their early meeting. Thank you so much.

OMG I LOVE THIS! SO SO MUCH! Can you pleaseeeeeeeeeeeee write a second chapter? I really really love this OMG

This is so not a one shot, this is the first chapter of a great fic.

omg this was ...omg:)
i think it would be really cool if you continue this
maybe with him searching for her or running into each other at some place
pleaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaas e it would would be so amazing!:)