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Why make him so pathetic? This whole fucking thing is so cringy.

Someone needs to draw all of this
Thank you for your great work and writing skill

Okay, before I start, let me just say that I hate having to say this to a fellow rock/metal fan. But after reading many reviews that made me question if there are any intelligent life forms on Earth anymore, I feel like I have to say this. Someone had to say this sooner or later.

Sorry man, but this whole story is a joke that went way further than it should be allowed to. It's nothing but pointless smut, the same jokes and the same sex scenes over and over and over again. If I had a nickel for every time I read things like "he pleasured every girl, switching one hole after the other", I'd be richer than Bill Gates. And you somehow managed to keep going with this "story" for 30 chapters. How did you even manage to write such a huge story that had absolutely zero plot? I wouldn't be able to do it even if you put a gun to my head.

Also. Not gonna complain about how you messed up half the girls' personalities, or that you made Sirzechs look like a douchebag while he is not one... but did you really have to introduce girls from other franchises to your story? Was the crapton of DxD girls not enough for Issei?

Overall, while I appreciate your dedication to this story, it was still nowhere near good, let alone great. Like I said, it was a joke that went too far. And you, as well as your readers, should treat it as one.

let me tell you about people you call 'haters'. they were not bashing or hate you but they were giving you CRITISM NOT FLAMES ! and i suppose you know what is critism. to be honest since this fic have a good amount follower i want to try this one but after my past experience i checked review first at final chapter and found some hard critism which led me checking chapter 31 and... found something that i regret after reading it. i'm surprised if you considered this chapter is good which i find it stupid. i can't give another critism since most of them already. you better make a rewrite for a better so it can help you from humilation of reviewer.

So good story was destroyed by envious haters, eh...

Interesting story. Good work.

All these haters can just go burn in fucking hell. That the problems with the world and the fucking human race. The internet and fanfics are just full of fucking assholes who think their know everything. Thinking they got the right to make others feel bad about themselves.
Fuck the haters. Nothing but bullying piece of fucking shit.

You can't write anything in this fucking fandom without some assholes telling you, your stories shit. Getting bent out of shape over a fucking story.

It funny how all these haters are bitching and complaining, saying that the girls are portrayed as nothing but sluts for wanting to fuck Issei, and being treated as sex objects. Went that is what all the girls do in the fucking anime/Light Novel. The girls are nothing but sex objects in the whole show. Issei harem throws themselves at him, rubbing their breasts over him, and wanting his dick. Yet, the haters get butt hurt over this?

What fucking hypocrites!

Highschool DxD is a fanservice show with the girls throwing themselves at the main protagonist. Yet assholes getting angry over this having lot smut and sexual themes. Acting like Highschool DxD is some fucking masterpiece went it's just a fanservice show with plots.

Also, Shinmai Maou No Testament is another fanservice show but with a lot of smut, and more sexual themes then DxD. And unlike DxD, Shinmai Maou doesn't have that many interesting plots and is just filled with fanservice. The girls are just as slutty as the girls in Highschool DxD.

All the girls are sluts and are always horny in fucking canon. Always taking off their clothes, and are always trying to have their way with the main character. The main characters harem are here for no other reason than liking Issei and Basara. So, get off your high horse's haters.

The Highschool DxD fanbase as a whole is just nothing but fucking toxic jackasses, just like the whole Naruto fanbase. But the Naruto fanbase is much worst and more toxic.
I hope to God, that each of these haters will get killed or fucking stab to death.

Scumbags haters, go fuck yourself.

wow

I hope for Celis Reinhard and Kajura Rika well by edit in harem :)

Add Celis pleash. She my favorite girl in Shinmai.
wiki/Celis_Reinhartd

It is great news! Please, add Mirana Shatarova and Griselda to Ise Harem, two cute, innocent and virgin nun!

Still gonna read it for the hell. Can't wait to your newer stuff

hmm, well i'll be slightly sad about he shinmai stuff and how you're only going to make one last chapter, but i'm glad that you're going to make the finale. can't wait for it.

Glad to hear your still working on the story hopefully the next chapter will be up by the time Yasaka makes her debut in the new series.