Enjoyed the storyline. Great read.

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I am now bery intrigued! You are a very good writer! This chapter has an air of mystery to it that I really like and I fully intend to bookmark this story and continue reading it. I usually don't read a lot of rumbelle lol, but I'm very interested to see where this goes! The pacing is great and the characterization is spot on. I like thelma a lot! Keep it up

Love, love, loved it! The twists were awesome & many times unexpected! I await your next one.

You mean April 16th. If the publisher was going to see Belle on March 16th, she'd have already missed the meeting.

If Daniel had been born in 1866, then he'd be 22 in 1888, not 27.

That was an incredibly beautiful story. So glad Daniel and Isabelle were able to see each other again and she still had a life of her rather than being a ghost herself. Happy to have seen Killian was able to have his redemption and happy ending, would have love for him and Isabelle to have been together but there was no way she would have ever forgiven him despite how sorry he truly was. I see that Robert was able to meet Belle he better not mess this up.

This was a beautiful story and I am glad that Robert found his own Belle in the end!

From Garrett: Wow! It was a very good story. Although, I was expecting that Mrs. Babcock and Robert would be sitting there having tea and then the Captain and Isabelle would appear and tell them the "real story."

From me: I'm so very proud of you! You did an amazing job and I loved where you took this. I would have hated for your story to have ended up like the movie - so sad. Your's was sweet and beautiful, full of suspense and romance. I can't wait to read your next story!

From Garrett: It's a very, very good story. Almost kind of too lifelike, almost eery.

From me: I caught that James Nolan was Prince Charming right away, but thought that Mr. Blanchard's daughter was Mary Margaret and was confused at first. I love how you have written this story and how sweet you made Isabelle's passing. I can't wait to read the epilogue!

From Garrett: Wow!

From me: Ugh! No, no, no, no, no. Seriously wrong. Well written, but no! Not Daniel.

From Garrett: What's going to happen to Daniel?

From me: Cora is SCARY! Very good writing, dearie.

As poignant as the ending of Titanic. A story well told; may this be the start of many more.

I loved this story so much, thank you! Near the end I re-watched the movie, which has always been a favorite. I was imagining Em and Bobby in the movie roles, and it would totally work. You captured the essence of the characters both of the movie and Belle and Gold/Rumple so perfectly. It was romantic and heartbreaking, and true to their characters in every way. Beautiful writing, I have recommended this to everyone more than once.

Aww that was sweet I loved it and I'm glad finally Gold has found his Belle!

The previous chapter reminded me a bit of Nicholas Sparks The Notebook with the way they died and were reunited in heaven. It was sad yet beautiful!