good story but when u did the names and the groups u missed out Lloyd

great fic! really loved it and though tit was pretty good. you should write a sequel ASAP. though you did have a few grammatical problemos man.
easily fixed though. if you would like, lease R&R my fic, Aftermath. PLEASE! if so, DANKE! GRACIAS! THANK YA! (pick which language who wish, just please r&r.)

No, not here to tell how to improve the story or nothin like that... since its done. But as far as i've read, ch 3. I like it. And i see one of the chapter title has Zieg. Bringing him back huh? I think its great that you do, cuaa SOME people like me wasnt happy with tha real ending... dying and so. So... thanks. I m lookin forward to finishing it.

That was a great story Hawk! I really like the way the final battle ended and i am beginning my own story as of now but i dont think it will be as good as yours was. I think i might have to play through LOD a couple more times I've played through it like 30 times so now i say what they say b4 they say it but congrats and i am goin to read your other one now

i really like your story and i think you have alot of talent as a writer. i also write and would like to know how can i submit a story

love that war action,but stop with the dead coming back to life.

Please don't. If you do, there will be serious consequences. I hope that you continue with this story and the sequel to it. I can not wait until the end of thiis comes out. I was wondering if you could look at my story, Link in Endiness? Thanks in advance.

Please make a sequel, or at least a continuation of this, because it is awesome. I hope that you continue with this story.

Oh, war time war time! CONTINUE HAWK! This is geting much more interesting!

YAY! UPDATIVNESS! MUSHINESS! WEDDININESS! YAYS! CONTINUE HAWK! E! *jumsp around over hyperlyactive and hits a wall* Ack... _ *falls over and twicthes* CONTINUE

SHORT! surprising it took me so long to read XD

sorry about that

i hath wished you luck... oh shit hang on one second, GOOD LUCK! Now I hath wished you good luck :D

E! *tackles* YOU BRANG HIM BACK! YOU THE BEST! E! - *glomps Lavit* *question* Can I's character have romance with him? ;;

OKAY! THSI IS GETTING EVEN MORE INTERESTING BY TEH MOMENT! YOu had bettr continue Hawk! E! *dances happy dance* This fic is awesome! Surely, i hope if you finish it, you do a sequal!

Interesting! Continue, Um...when ya gonna anyway? Its getting interesting with the girl and Kain n' Leon, ehhe. My favs so far !

ick, mushy stuff, i swear ur better at it then i am anyways, i've got an odd request for you, guess i'll talk to you about it on msn