Hey i can see that it's been like three years but i still wanted to say that this is pretty good!

I really like this please update more!

I'm too lazy to log in, but not too lazy to say I want more of this! Please please update! You're an amazing writer :D

Please carry on this is amazing️️️

Hey just read the fic and I love it :) I wish I had some ideas like you asked for but I've got nothing :( school could be cool seeing more characters from yj in your universe turn up and stuff idk sorry
I'll just look forward to reading more when you write more :)
You've done a great job and I love and feel for the version of these characters you've created :)

Well this quickly became one of if not my favorite bluepulse fic. Such an interesting take on these characters. I'm interested in seeing how this little plan to stay out in El Paso works out. Of course that won 't last forever as you stated. Jaime comes off as a bit unstable despite his calm demeanor, and his behavior in this chapter, even though not too alarming, hints at some kind of meltdown in the future . Not to say Bart's not barking up the same tree. I'm eager to see what happens next, but no rush on updating .

LET THESE TWO KISS ALREADY

GOSH! i wish they could just be happy and stay in el paso

Hi, just wanna say that this story is super adorable, and I would be really happy to see updates from this story I like this AU concept, and I like how their "illness" corresponds with their characters in the actual show.
As for suggestions, I'm sorry that I don't really have any good ones.. This is more like an opinion, but I think if they are sent to public school, they will most likely get picked on by other students. This could be interesting to read, how they overcome it and school curriculum, and I would personally like to see how you put your spin into it.
Looking forward to the next chapter! :)

Long time reader, first time reviewer.
It has been so long since I read anything Bluepulse. I've missed these diary entries that you write, and seeing this fic updated on my favorites made my day!
I want this to be natural, coming from you and the amazement that is your writing style. The only suggestion I have is to let Bart and Jamie experience high school and interact with other characters from the show that are in your universe. You've done an amazing job giving them backgrounds to fit this world, I'm interested in what you can come up with for the other characters.
I know I'm not one to talk, having one story and all, but I do have advice. Let the relationship between the two bleed in naturally as they experience new things. The movie part a few chapters back, and the whole park setting was amazing! Write this for you first, and us second. If you let the words flow, and it surprises you, moves you, then it would have the same affect on us!
In other words, this story is yours, it's amazing, and I appreciate that you even shared it on this website!
From a long time reader, I wish you the best of luck with your writing!

Yes! Yes! YES! IM SO HAPPY FOR THIS UPDATE! I loved everything about it especially Jamie slowly starting to make Bart realizes his feelings and improving his self-esteem. I can't wait for Jamie to tell him he loves him and turn that little plan about the house with five dogs into a reality. Please update soon!

Aaaaa I'm so happy and excited this updated I love the piece of work so much! Thank you I don't really know how to tell you how happy I am rn, again thank you :D

This is buetyfull! I loved ever single second of it! I haven't seen a fanfiction that really got me into the letter writing style plus I never seen one that felt like a novel! I love it soooo much! I really love how Jaime and Bart completely work well together even if its hard! Please update soon!

I think I'm in love with this story. I didn't think i would like it at first, but I'm really enjoying it. And it's cute too (:

If I'm being honest, I kinda wanna go to an asylum right now, if YJ was there! Bart is one of my favorites, and I missed the hyper personality from Wally. Season 2 made him boring. But Bart makes up for that! Well, I guess if someone said "I'm from the future!", they'd be pegged as crazy. I'd just ask them winning lottery numbers in the future, so I could get rich. This story is the reason I'm procrastinating cleaning my room, so if my mom finds out, I'm throwing you under the bus.;) I hope you continue, but no matter how long it takes, I shall wait for you my dear. I just hope I have wifi!
XOXO:)