What a nice ending. I still wonder why Yukino's not featured in this story. (although she was mentioned) Like she has all the zodiac keys already. And the fact that Natsu's still alive, like wth. I like the story plot and the ending. I'm making this a favorite.

Ok i am so done with this

What the?! She left her keys while going on a training and mission? Is that even right? I was drowning with pink and i think im being annoyed with the color even though it's one of my favorites

Hmmm okay isn't that stealing? Very OOC for them to take what's not theirs. I think the pink book is lame. Well i think this story has potential so im not giving up yet eventhough my review is not that good. Gomen.

Ah ok. But you dont blurt out your feeling to total stranger that way. Well i dont know, it seems that it's too sudden. Hmmn it's just my opinion anyway, i usually prefer a realistic development on the characters. If she said all that to natsu its okay since they already build a strong foundation in their relationship since they know each other for so long.

What duh? I am most certain that i've read this line from another story with rolu.. And almost the same speech that natsu say that he will not take back what he just said?! What's happening here?

..."Stop being a selfish, whiny, spoiled baby about this! "

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Like Mal from Disney's Descendants?

Your not the only one..i stooped reading after chapter five.. most fanfiction i found here lately she never uses the keys..and she becomes a Mary sue..

I'm so confused, u do know she should still have her keys, she is still a celestial wizard and or mage so why doesn't she just use that power as well and combined them and fight along with her spirits also why doesn't she tell them who she really is and fight as Lucy in the grand magic games

That was a good story like frfr however was it really necessary for Natsu and Mira to have a moment like that? I really dont see how that should've been added in this story...still a good story but that part wasn't necessary

Once a cheater always a cheater. Natsu has officially cheated on both his ex g/f's now. And one with her sister. Still a scum bag. Mira is even worse though IMO.

Great story. Wish you killed Natsu through, he still cheated on Lucy despite Mal's influence. The cheating caused the whole incident to occur. And here he goes again cheating.

Leave it to FT to be the cause of saving the world and/or the end of the world. If this was my story, I would end it with Mal kills everyone except Natsu. She keeps him alive to witness the end of the world and her control of it. Make him see he is the result of the end of the world. Eventually he turns into a dark mage or forced and is one of the dark mages Mal has under her rule. Because his actions started the end of the world.

Or instead of her keeping him as a dark mage, she let him go in the world, but tracked and followed him. Making his life hell every where he goes, spreading word that Natsu is the cause of her rule and the end of the world. Posting flyers for his capture everywhere. Even going as far as thanking him for his help to capture her throne. So everywhere he goes, everyone knows, therefore hated by all. Hunted by the remaining "few good forces left". Forcing him to be leave alone in some remote area by himself or constantly be on the run. And making a spell follow him around/ or something that denies him the ability to commit suicide.

Or keep Lisanna captive and Natsu captive. Make Lisanna the guild whore/slut. Forcing Natsu to watch everyone she bangs. When she would get cum in her mouth, she would transfer it to Natsu mouth or spit it out on him. Obviously mind control or blackmail(like threaten to kill him if she did not obey or vice versa if Natsu does not take the semen then Lisanna dies).

But, I know that would not happen in your story. I wish it did. I guess I'm more like Mal then I thought. I suppose I have a dark mind.

FT doesn't deserve Lucy...yet she stays with those traitors.

if iwas lucy i would of walked half way out the door then turned a round transforme into r and said bye and winked