please update, it's interesting

If your still having writer's block on this.

They finally decide after many days to meet the autobots. Her feelings are expanding and she can't stop thinking about the silver mech.

Said silver mech learns about the true situation and decides to train the heroins.

The decepticons find out about the herions and attempt to botnap them. Only to have Barricade and Frenzy decide to protect them and join their side and eventual join the autobots after much thought.

Just thought I'd share some ideas. I would love to read more of this and hope you update soon since it's been so long since your last update.

Well...if you have writers block, here’s an idea.

The Cons find them. They’re Fems.

The Autobots can train them. (Can you imagine Sideswipe getting cocky trying to show off and hurting himself?! Priceless.)

That...Was brilliant.

I don’t think anyone has thought of that “issue”.

Switching back and forth POVs during a chapter isn’t great for the story’s flow. If you must change the POV, it should be done at the beginning of the chapter and remain until the next.

The reaction was genuine. Nice.

Hmmm...

This chapter just sort of dumped the info on the protaganists. I feel like they would have benifited figuring it out on their own or hearing it from another Cybertronian. This feels a bit...easy.

I feel like this and the last chapter should have been one. This one feels a bit short.

The beginning stagnated a bit but not too bad for your first.

love this so much please update again soon.

I completely forgot about this story. Good luck on your fast and thank you for updating.

I'm glad that you're trying to battle your bulimia. If you aren't already, you should be going to a doctor who can help you. Also, find a IRL friend, or a family member you trust who can help you watch your diet. Fasting for 14 days is intense, especially for someone who already has health problems. I feel nauseous if I skip meals for just two days. Still, I'll be happy for you if this method works.

Nice chapter, even if it was short lol
And I understand what you are going through. I went through a bit of an eating disorder as well during high school. I would hardly eat and exercise a lot because I was so focused on my weight. Soon it would get up to the point where I would give up and binge eat like crazy. My weight kept going up and down and I couldn’t stop myself. Took a long while after high school, but now hardly ever think about it and managed to maintain a healthy weight, but I still struggle with my eating habits most days.

Glad that you are doing better and I wish you well on your journey.

:)

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I’m glad you are try

Le gasp!

Is this an update I smell~? ;D

Luv it soooooo much

~Aloris