thanks u so much for this amazing story. Keep it up!

I see what u meant by 40 pages. HOW DO U WRITE SO MUCH. I can only write a little a day and only one session per day.

I'M DEFINITY NOT SOBBING ALL OVER MY LAPTOP!
YOU ARE!

why Ron? D';

Why the hell would anyone ever read this shit

Once again. Why doesn't he leave Britain altogether if the ministry is trying to force him to become their slave.
I really, Really hate weak minded Protagonists who contantly bitch after other's affections.

Here's a good idea. If everyone in Hogwarts hates him so much and thinks of him as a Evil Dark being then why the hell doesn't he simply leave the school. I'm sure there are other magical intitutions that would gladly take him within their ranks without so much fuss.

Even tho this was finished when I was month old this is such a cool story cant wait to see what happens next

Well I kind of enjoyed it. But sadly there are certain things I could never like in any ff.
1. Dumbledore is not a stupid or weak wizard. Rather he was the best.
2. Too many grammatical errors. I suggest you get your script proofread before posting a new story.
3. Too many zig zags and though Harry is good to be powerful but keep it realistic.
4. Lily being Voldy's daughter... really?

You are spelling staring with two r's instead of one.

I like it all except "his girlfriend" and her girlfriend." They use the names Ginny and Harry in the book. Great story though!

Stop being modest! This is the best fanfiction I have ever read in my life! There is only sweet, not gross context. This is exactly what I look for. The characters also seem to match those in the book! I love the suspense and compassion.

One of the best stories I have ever read, where do I find the sequel?

U are so good at writting u should go into a compotition u would definitly win

To short

I have a question: if shaw is not a descendent from slitherine, then who is