| Reviews for A Burden Halved |
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karmen chapter 1 . 7/14/2019 that was actually really good. love the sciles bromance |
writeallnight chapter 1 . 11/5/2018 This is amazing. "Sucktasticness" is SUCH a Stiles word. You've got his tone and temperament so perfectly. This is 100% the best Stiles fic I have read. Beautiful work! |
teeina chapter 1 . 8/30/2018 it. was. beautiful. a few lines in and i was already captured. it was like i wasn’t even reading, it just flowed. i absolutely loved how you wrote the dialogue. I think it reflected the way stiles was feeling and the way you changed it at the end... beautiful you clearly deserve more than eight reviews. |
Allison237Gleek chapter 1 . 11/18/2015 How does this have so little reviews? It's fucking brilliant, I love it. |
Bilei Pancy chapter 1 . 8/9/2015 This is very beautiful. :) I love it! |
carameltootsieroll chapter 1 . 2/5/2015 YOU DESERVE MORE REVIEWS! This was epic. I can't even talk enough about how great I think your talent is. This fanfic was written unconventionally, with the use of subtle conversations and emphasized narration more. I think you executed this writing style really well. I loved it! You write so poetically, so dramatically, I really felt the emotions you were trying to convey. I LOVE STILES AHHH and I love how you really delved into the effects of what happened in 3A. I know it was explored in the show, but you just explored it even more and wow, I am very much satisfied. Keep writing because I loved this story! |
xxElla MadElynxx chapter 1 . 1/31/2015 Perfect writing! It was slightly frustrating how they never even talked about Stiles getting into a freaking accident in the show. There was blood on his forehead, they must have noticed it. Anyways, that is why I loved this so,so much! Thank you! -Ellie |
GlOmP3R chapter 1 . 1/1/2015 Awh, this was sad but cute. Loved it. |
Linguam chapter 1 . 10/3/2014 I love this. There's really no other way to say it. I love how everything's described through a "reflective" perspective, it makes for a really interesting scenery. And there's something with it (probably the fact that we all know where this will eventually lead) that just awakens the apprehension and trepidation in a way similar to the one I felt while watching the actual series. I think you portray it all beautifully, the characters, their relationships, Stiles' denial that something's wrong (and more so than usual). Everything. Thank you for a heartbreakingly amazing reading experience! /Linguam |
raneko.Otaku chapter 1 . 9/24/2013 oh. very interesting. i would love to read more of this and have it further elaborate...but i like it like this though, so maybe not? i don't know...what am i feeling? tell me! it was sort of anticlimactic, but i like it nonetheless...i think it was the emotion and the "Stile-centric" -ness of it...loved the bit where the gang actually CARE. and oh Derek. Derek, Derek, Derek... nice job! |
Murasakionfire chapter 1 . 9/23/2013 That was amazing! It was beautifully written and very much in character. I am so sick of reading stories where Scott is a jerk and noone cares about stiles. Im so glad you didnt take it there. Please update soon if you are going to write more. I loved it soo much and cant wait to see if you take this farther. You could make stiles some kind of shadow seeing freaj and the shadows will haunt him. Just an idea though but i truly loved this! |