The Council hearing scene was just sooooooooooo EPIC XD
Never fuck with Space Marines, Ave Imperator!

The random bolding of words is atrocious. I can't read this shit when I don't know what needs emphasis and what doesn't.

Wow, this is truly , atrociously bad. My immortal level of bad.
I'm excited to see how bad it can get, it's not that often when you stumble unto something of this calibre.

Great story though it got confusing after entering the digsite, i think thats just a case of lots of events and mot enough exposition though and it brings back memories of mass effect human revolution.

Well, this is certainly a very bold attempt at a crossover. Truly one the boldest ever. Surely this bold new world will further embolden our bold heros. Likewise the boldness of Shepard and her bold crew of the bold should meet this bold new challenges boldly, AND with boldness. Bold.

Interesting premise, could've been a great story. But the bolding, man. The random bolded words render this fic unreadable.

That moment, when you find a good fanfic that has not been updated for years and finish reading it, is saddening.

When you find it is being continued...oh yes.

man :DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD IM SO HAPPY THANK YOUUUUUU

Wow, I had lost hope to see this updated again!

The random bold words and capital letters make it very hard to read.

I was interested in your story but I can't put up with all the random bold words. I don't know what you were going for but it came across horribly. Try to find a good fanfic with something like that, let alone an actual novel. I dare you.

all the random Bolding of words killed this for me

Why you not continue?

Jesus Christ.
Stop using two paragraphs where a sentence would do, get to the fucking point and stop bolding so many goddamn words.
This is some of the most aggravating, pretentious, disjointed writing I've ever read. My Immortal was easier to read.
What the hell, man.