Oh man! I love the story.
The psychological work is excellent and written very understandable. The characters have depth, uniqueness and appeal.
The story is sound and stringent as well as entertaining and quite thrilling.
Tension is following a very nice ocean-weave pattern which makes the story fascinating and very easy to read.
So, all over this is quite some excellent work you have done here and it is appreciated very much.

This is one of my favorite stories and one I have reread multiple times. I am looking forward to when a new chapter comes out. Thank you for all the excellent writing on all your stories.

I am honestly looking forward to seeing how this story plays out and hope to see a new installment soon I have been thoroughly enjoying the story and the way you have been writing it keep going love it.

I wish life wasn't so busy so that I could power through chapters more often but that just makes the times I can all the more enjoyable. I will say I'm not a fan of your characterizations of people like Fury and now Jean, but no more than I dislike it when Dumbledore is bad in an otherwise amazing HP story. I fanboy-ed over the fact you mentioned Pyro in an earlier review, but the fact you actually included him is so much more amazing. I'm looking forward to what the next few chapters I can get through hold

You mentioned Pyro! Even in passing that's still great. (His interaction with Magneto on the X-Jet in X-2 and his overall arc in that movie made him one of my favorite students in the movie-verse) Just when I thought this story couldn't get any better. Next you'll find a way to have Magneto help out and turn a new leaf at least briefly. I really liked how wrote Scotts thoughts, especially as they related to Jean. The detail that went into how she notices the little things was a nice touch. Definitely fleshes out the characters in a believable way

Browbeat indeed. That was a brilliant characterization of Pepper. I especially liked your take on her Tonys back and forth I love you code. Sorta a Princess Bride as you wish thing. I hope we get to actually see the good publicity the Mutants get from this and I'm definitely looking forward to to seeing more of not only the, but Loki too

This story is amazing so far. Very enjoyable and I'm liking how practically seamless you're keeping the pov changes

UPDATE

As I started reading John's part my pandora started to play Burn it Down by Skillet. It was just too ironic

I've read the first few chapters multiple times and somehow always lacked time (at the time) to read further. Following as a reminder to go further into the story.

Really interesting choice to use Jarvis' pov here- it worked pretty good though, so double kudos for that :) I think you handled it really well

One thing that always bugged me about Sam Wilson was that it is seriously unprofessional of him to be counseling friends and teammates the way he does. It's one one thing to give advice on things a close friend might but counselors are supposed to be as unbiased and personally uninvolved as possible. Essentially creating a safe space to vent and work through issues, get advise and tips to help handle whatever the problem(s) is. Which just isn't truly possible when the counselor themselves are physically and or emotionally involved with the person and or situation, creating unintentional bias.

Sorry that just always gets to me. Love your story so far, both in your writing itself and the style is easy to follow.

Love this! Way better than the movies!

Lol. OMG common sense ftw. What a foreign concept.

I can't wait for the next one:)