Kishimoto loving bitch.

I really wanted to see a reading version of the Dragonslayer fanfic maybe you could do ?. continues this fanfic also

Are you stupid Erza is a year older than Grey. So making her younger is plain fucking stupid.

Sorry to hear but plz update soon!

great start to story keep it up

Nice intro hope you continue this story

update soon

this is nice

very good prologue
very good chapter, looking forward to the next chapter.

What are the limits, will you do crossovers? If you will I have many ideas for some good animes, well at least to me they are good.

This was a really good chapter.

The magic naruto is learning is nice and diverse.

Will naruto join a guild? If so, will it be:

(A) Fairy Tail

(B) A dark guild-Grimoire Heart?

Please update this soon. I really want to read more.

Nice will naruto join grimiore kokoro when he is older

I Love it! And someone finally knows the difference between unconscious and subconscious. (Beta-Reader; gets on my nerves sometimes) I like how you kept Naruto's family alive. Great job, can't wait for the next chapter.

Awesome, I can't wait for the rest of the story, especially when Erza finds out about Naruto and when the two siblings finally meet. I do have to ask when will Erza find out that Naruto is her brother, before they meet by over hearing Minato and Kushina talking about him, or after they meet by Kushina and Minato telling her who he really is after she says she met him? Please update as soon as you can. Now if you don't mind I'm going for a walk.

Integra: NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!

please man go for the next chapter