Reviews for Breakthrough
Pandora580 chapter 1 . 7/5/2017
what arc did this happen
AlucardChick101 chapter 2 . 11/4/2016
This is awesome
Zanzar chapter 2 . 11/18/2015
What happens next and when is the next chapter and will the ratting change?
AinLinx chapter 2 . 11/15/2015
UPDATE! MORE! PLEASE!
Brazilwolf chapter 2 . 8/19/2015
I like the story a lot. Seems interesting. I like that Naruto is strong. Since she is a Ninja the when they are trying to spy on them I think she should be able to react also that she is stronger physically like in a combat hand to hand fight. I hope that you make another chapter cause if you do I can't wait to read it
Guest chapter 2 . 7/23/2015
I WANT MORE!
Fruits.Baskets1 chapter 2 . 5/25/2015
Add more chapters please
Kurosaki Yukia chapter 2 . 12/28/2014
PLEASE CONTINUE AND UPDATE SOON! _
Reichenfaust chapter 2 . 8/10/2014
This is a pretty good story too, and it would be wicked to see it continued.
Just2aw3s0me chapter 2 . 7/25/2014
So my question is will naruko be with Bruce or gaara?
GhostHunter.z chapter 2 . 4/27/2014
Please? Another update...
mattcun chapter 2 . 4/13/2014
plz write more
Lalapinkcustard chapter 1 . 4/10/2014
It's really good C:
The only thing I don't think is very realistic is the fact that Naruko and Gaara trusted them so quickly and told them where they came from and what they're doing and all. I mean, as ninjas they wouldn't just end up in a new place and continue to only care about their own fight without assessing the risk.
Anyways, s'good:3
Meliara422 chapter 2 . 3/20/2014
If Naruko is Naruto, then its not hard to believe that the dobe would let slip information; sometimes naruto doesn't know any better. its a pretty good story so far :)
jh831 chapter 2 . 3/3/2014
its good,
but naruko gave up information about the elemental nations way to easy to people she didn't know
yes, she is trusting, but she gave away infrmation to a potential enemy, who is she t say that they wont use the information against her or if they ever got to the elemental nation, the different countries?
just saying, a shinobi shouldn't divulge secrets like that
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