God, I really could see Lovi commit suicide from hopelessness... I am a tsundere myself... so I know tsundere is in reality a self defense mechanism,... to protect our hearts... from breaking,. by simply push away the idea of love, prevent us from falling in love... Because we're afraid... But... there is one or two times when someone couldn't help but falling in love... and it really hurts... when they didn't reciprocate this feelings... Because that is probably only once or twice in our lifetime to fall in love with someone... We simply didn't take love easily... When we love, it means something deep, deep enough to shatter our defense... Our hear was just so fragile and open... The person we love the most hurt us the worst... So... this fanfiction really hits home... I'm crying. That was a silly prank, but... Antonio, my dear, you failed to understand him, no? It hurts to find out someone we love the most failed to notice our change and didn't even think, want to think how it will affect us. Oh God, sorry I vent... This is just too understandable as I feel that I'm so much related/similar with Lovi's personality. I am just as much suicidal as fic make me feels like I am Lovi myself. But, well, I'm afraid of blood and physical pain, probably that's the reason I'm still alive today. Thank you, author. Thank you.

Don't mind me *sniffles* I just have some, uh, sharp objects my feels...

I like this. It hurts in all the right places, but now I really want mire! XD
Love your name BTW, I can tell you have awesome taste.

What... I finished it and had to go back to the first chapter... What?

This is absolutely amazing, my dear...

Yeah, really best Name and stuff I've chosen.

However, about your story... it's disturbing me a bit that Romano's so out of character, I absolutely can't recognize him. Sure, you can argue with a facade and stuff, but even there is an end something. At one point it starts bein anything but logical.

But the thing disturbing me the most... well, I really know depressend and suicidal people from every perspective. I knew people having it, I saw people trying it, I tried it myself. And thus in my opinion this is quite unrealistic, too. We sure don't know the full story, we didn't see what he had to suffer, but it's actually really rare to really commit suicide because of a love that in the end wasn't absolutely impossible, even if he thought so. A normal human and especially a Nation which has seen so much in life, wouldn't do so because of that. And also: Where is the last kick, the reason he now did it? What exactly happened? If not planned long ago, what it doesn't look like, there has to be a trigger, the last drop. But it isn't there.

I hope you don't hate me for my totall unfriendly and harsh feedback! D:
Have a nice New Yeah and stuff. :3

why? whhhhhhyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy? D'''''''''': noooooooooooooooo

Oh my god.

...did you just... kill Romano?

Perfect!

Oh my God...
First, I'd like to say good luck with the cello thing. I'm sure things will be fine, and you'll sound AMAZING.
And...the first chapter was the note...
And Ludwig being the person who saw, and cared...Oh my God...
It wasn't even the lover, or the brother. It was the "enemy".
Heartbreaking, and yet so beautiful.
Thanks so much for writing.
Until next time!
STARFIRE67

... i really just want to strangle Feli... i know it's not technically his fault, but I don't care. Strangle...

Oh my God...I'm...
Lovi...
I really want you to add another chapter, so I could see the reactions. But I don't know what you'd put. I don't even think it needs a second chapter, it's so fantastic.
Until next time!
STARFIRE67

Your stories will always astound me. They're so poetic! Good job!

Increible!
Hablo español! Pero traduci tu fic en google XD!
Mierda, mierda. Mierda! Es genial! Adoro tu fic :3...
Y como que WTF? Que final! Lo adoro :3.
Encerio murio? El traductor quita sentido a las oraciones... Es muy triste!
Bueno, igual me encanto!

Awww. So beautiful! Love it! :3