Is it too late for me?

"What did I do?" Oh boy, you did lots! I thought the last chapter was a bit of a side story, but I guess not. Hilarious all the more, though!

The concept and the flow is good. But the writing has much to be desired. So many grammar mistakes and too much passive voice. Passive voice is great for certain poetic tones, but this part of the story doesn’t need that.

haha, cuse she molested him XD

And Lonqu fears Robin more haha. I just love this story so much.

Hurry my fav FEA fanfic is still alive, but I'm still confused with this chapter in the previous one Robin was affected by a love potion and now something else is happening?

A really interesting story btw it's already revealed by intelligent systems that Chrom is 19 in the first half of the story and his little sister is 16.

I don't like to hug box but I didn't really have standout concrit pop out to me when I was reading, but this was quite enjoyable in a way I can't explain that other psedo-novelizations aren't maybe because you didn't limit your self to that pigeonhole?

This was an interesting take! Can't wait to see more.

this chapter was really good and cute!

holy fuck this story is so good!

Please write more. Someday. I really like this story. I'll be waiting forever if need be. And also worried and jealous Chrom are really cute.

I seem to recall Chrom and female Robin having a fairly awkward series of Support Conversations, so I am enjoying how they seem to have the inverse here where it's really easy for the two to be close and comfortable but it's made awkward by everyone else around them. Haha.

I'm glad to see this story got an update! I've always loved it since I discovered it a couple years ago, and I'm happy to know that it will get an end. I did notice that your writing style is a little different, but I like the new style, and it flowed well with the old style.

I hope to see another excellent chapter soon!

This is so good! But Im still a bit confused... is Robin Plegian royalty or a noble or something? Also, did Robin dream up like everything because the chapter went from Robin getting drunk and making Lon'qu pass out to there being rumors of her pregnancy to her having a fever to them preparing to leave ferox. What exactly happened? Also, please update soon!