Que maravillosa secuela, me hizo llorar, en realidad los dos últimos capitulo me conmovieron mucho, fue una historia hermosaaaa, de principio a fin, me encanta como puedes describir cada detalle de su vida doméstica, adoro a esos niños, al perro, toda la historia, fue realmente linda, de lo mejor que he leído.

a lovely end to a wonderful series

I know this is five years too late, and you might not have cared even if I'd written it five years ago, but sugar DOES NOT make children hyper.

What a beautiful glimpse of the family life J&L would have. ( I love that you gave them boy and girl twins - so perfect )

This one is very nice story and I hope there is a little more to it as i would like to know how the kids grow up.

I've also stayed up until past 2 am to finish this. And I'm a twin so I love these kids. Great story. Love these characters.

Loved this story! Got a little misty-eyed with their moonlit walk on the beach, talking about their future. Makes me a little sad, too.

Cheesy bacon potatoes? Egg and sausage casserole? Omg, the cholesterol! ;D:D.
Love this story. Nice to read a realistic domestic piece with the pair being such loving and supportive parents.

Really beatiful... thanks a lot!

Welp I was reading this til 2am and I have no regrets.
I usually reaaally dislike fics that involve J/L children, but you wrote this perfectly, with a good balance of family-ness and Jane-Lisbon sexytime.
Im quite sad its over.

Loved both stories! Are you doing another one? I wonder how Jane reacts to more firsts. Crush,kiss,heart brake,friend,death of loved one they new? And many many more to come. This is a great take on what could have happened!

Oh wow, I'm just realizing as I am going through my inbox this morning reading stories that you write a lot, Idan! I'm so glad to do too, because your stories are awesome. And man am I behind. This was a lovely ending to a fantastic sequel. I so enjoyed watching them as parents, the push and pull of a married life, juggling everything that comes with those things and work and keeping the romance alive. So good. Thanks for this. My guess is will never have something like this on the show... (Kids, not the romance...,) so it's fun to read it in other places. It occurs to me now that I probably didn't review every chapter of this even though every chapter deserved a review. I'll do better with your stories in the future! I do so love your writing and how you portray Jane and Lisbon and will keep reading your stuff for as long as you decide to grace us with it. Great job.

Love it!

it's really really good, it was so good I readed the first one which are 61 chapters!
could you write one of when the twins are 15 or like that please please? I'd love it!

Such a beautiful ending to this Sequel and they got the puppy :D
One of my fave Scenes was Jane pretending to be scared to work for the FBI so Liam wouldn't be scared to talk about it. My heart actually melted.

No idea if you plan to write a third part to this Story, a time jump into the Kids Teenager years or even to the point of them moving out, if you should I'm totally on board. I really would love to see that.

Anyway, love this Family you created (as I probably only mentioned about a hundred times xD)

Can't wait for your next fic :D