| Reviews for His Final Visit |
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  Guest chapter 1 . 6/3 I love how you wrote this |
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/3 I would love to see a continuation, but I doubt that’ll happen. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/3 ...ouch. This literally shattered my heart (and set me on a quest to find more Lokane fics to heal it XD), but I still keep coming back to read it because it’s just so good! |
 1sunfun chapter 1 . 7/12/2019 Sad. |
| Chiafun chapter 1 . 7/25/2017 gosh i hate youthis is too sad but beautiful |
| Windy Darlington chapter 1 . 7/8/2017 Oh you murdered me. Dammit I'm crying. Lord I hate you and love you at the same time. WHY HAVE I NEVER READ THIS BLOODY FANFIC? GOOD GOD THIS HURTS. This is so poetic and beautiful and I just. . . oh my god, that hurt me so badly. It was beautiful. WH |
| Ellie chapter 1 . 1/13/2016 That's so, just right in the feels...-sniffle- |
| AvengersLoki chapter 1 . 11/21/2015 Awww. That was so sweet but sad too. I'd love it if you did a sequel too : ) |
| PensPencils chapter 1 . 2/8/2015 This was so dramatic in the best way possible, it left me wanting a sequel to continue this awesome tale. Good job! |
| Vampi chapter 1 . 12/9/2014 Hope you write a sequel to this very soon. Will you? |
| pankolicious16 chapter 1 . 11/2/2014 Would love a sequel:) |
| bloomsburry chapter 1 . 8/23/2014 beautiful story! i hope there is a sequel! |
| Analise chapter 1 . 4/10/2014 So sad! And so like him - taking the high road when it pleases him, going his own way alone. I would love for him to have altered his own fate by doing this, her remembering just in time or something; if you went for other than a time loop that would work. :D Great job, and a very sweet kiss. A. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/6/2014 Noooo. I'm crying right now. This is so sad. Definitely do a sequel. |
| Donna chapter 1 . 3/3/2014 This is depressingly wonderful! My favorite kind of story! |
