| Reviews for Nine Lives |
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  Moonmoon chapter 3 . 4/15/2017 Oh, what calls depression on me Oh, it's the familiar depressed one I see I guess I lose my life here and now Because of the depression you call on me The nine lives I was to have, didn't catch up to the depression I had. Oh Emberfall what I would do to stop you from spreading the depression I somehow seeked Jk this is a pretty awesome poet, I must say, story or not I enjoyed every line that you gave us oh great one - I don't know what my name is |
 Christmas Spirit of the Brook chapter 3 . 11/26/2014 Oh, that's just cold. "Remember the lies I told you here so that you can live your life with cheer." That would be like childhood destroyed for a kid! When you think about it, that's kind of funny in a depressing way. |
| Someone chapter 2 . 11/5/2014 I didn't get that. |
| Someone chapter 1 . 11/5/2014 Hmm... So his isn't exactly a story, really? By the way, will you write some more stories? I like your stories a lot. |
| Illuminastro chapter 3 . 7/5/2014 OK. Now I liked that - Wasnice. StarClaaaaaaaaan why are you so far away? **gosh. Now that's stuck in my head :P |
| Illuminastro chapter 2 . 7/5/2014 Pozemh. That was kinda cool, I'm not much of a poem person though so don't mind me... just dropping by and swinging out... |
| Illuminastro chapter 1 . 7/5/2014 Yikes, that IS depressing. |
| Willowsmoke of ShadowClan chapter 3 . 3/3/2014 These are amazing! I love reading poetry that tells a story, and I especially lived the first one, telling how Owlstar lost all his lives. Great job! One thing- on the second one, the one about Talonstar, on the last line, you spelled 'paid' wrong. Other than that, it was perfect! |
| PetalDOHDawn chapter 2 . 10/10/2013 Ooh evil cat :) |
| Starfrost chapter 1 . 10/10/2013 Yay! There is already 3 chappies! Remember me? Remember me? Remember meeeeeee? JK! I know you do! Luv the poems, Ember! Got to go,now! Bye! XD |
| Icebreath chapter 3 . 10/10/2013 Keep writing XD! |
| Gavoot the Scoot chapter 3 . 10/10/2013 Whoa. That was fast uploading, but I don't exactly get it. Will the kit grow up to be leader, or is the leader speaking to the kit? :P :T Keep up the great work! StormxRaven |
| Gavoot the Scoot chapter 2 . 10/10/2013 Whoa. That is one bad leader. Keep up the great -but depressing- work! :3 |
| Icebreath chapter 1 . 10/1/2013 How many more chapters will you write? I really liked it. XD |
| Cinderfern chapter 1 . 9/30/2013 Depressing, but WOW that is well-written. A! I finished and was like "what? Only one chapter?" Update soon! Ok and for a cat (don't want Ravenflight to go through that, though he'll be WindClan leader soon, maybe...) you can use Talonstar of any Clan. Made that up on the spot! Yeah! :) |
