Reviews for The Devil's Progenitor
Zoran Dawn-Eclipse chapter 13 . 5/2
Looking forward to seeing what comes of this remake.

Glad you're back with us.
invoker26 chapter 13 . 5/2
I jump the latest chapter and just see about the rewrite, and yes it's quite cringe(y?) but it also quite interesting, especially I like this Naruto isn't happy go lucky idiot and would like to see what you can improve on this story. Thank you very much
invoker26 chapter 8 . 5/2
Where is this peace suddenly coming from? It makes no sense given Naruto upbringing and Kurama and Vergil being his only role model. I highly doubt either of them preaching about peace to influence Naruto
For the supposed indifference towards Konoha, Naruto is surprisingly very cooperative and doing things for Konoha with very minimal gain for his plan. And Kushina and Minato resurrection is also something that baffle me because Naruto know that with them being alive again they would be a problem for him and doing everything to bring him back to their suppose family.
AnimeA55Kicker chapter 13 . 5/1
Not going to lie, I feel so fucking old when these fics i read in my edgy teenage days come back. Please tone down what ever edge they may have been (which may or not have even been there, bc this in an old fic ive forgotten); but I do not trust the taste of my teenage self.
icecold1039 chapter 13 . 5/1
I do not remember this fanfic at all, and would definitely skip over now. No offense but your summary sucks. I assume that you have become a better writer because you mention cringing at the quality of the story and I'm wondering why you are bothering to rewrite it at all aside from some asking your permission to adopt the story?
anzeinleengardfleck chapter 1 . 5/1
100 liters of acid await you inside the tub
My line is to mix morphine with cocaine
Hey girl, welcome to Latin America,
I nailed it to your chest is an injection of adrenaline.

And you don't beat me, you don't beat me
You are looking at me like an airplane falling towards your window.
I'm going to be very mu with cooking soul
And in her ass I'm going to cook bananas.
SageNaruto3881 chapter 13 . 5/1
been a long time my friend welcome back
Jebest4781 chapter 13 . 5/1
good luck to you man
Alexander Black V chapter 12 . 5/1
When I was a writer, I took a year off and I felt like shit, it took you 6 years to come back, I wonder how you will feel.
Alexander Black V chapter 13 . 5/1
7 aƱos hijo de tu puta madre.
Saigo no Hana chapter 1 . 12/17/2019
I hope this fic had not bite the dust. I had read many good fics but most of them were left unfinished.
god of all chapter 12 . 3/17/2019
Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.
Guest chapter 12 . 6/24/2018
dear writer please make more chapters
Kingkong101 chapter 9 . 4/22/2018
No
Guest chapter 12 . 3/27/2018
More chapters wouls be appreciated
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