Dgreen20 (too lazy to log in) i've read this story at least nine times so far. Each time it still manages to bring a tear to my eye at the end. I love the character development of not only Math, but everyone in his team. Well written, amazing plot that seamlessly melds two games that couldn't be farther apart (aside from doom and animal crossing), I love every word of it. Even though I know what comes next you still manage to leave me on the edge of my seat. Good job. 11/10. Best one I found on this site ever

Holy shit...this is one of the best fanfic iv ever read and it pains me to see it finished...ant chance for a part 2?plz

This is just too damn good. I still can't believe I care this much about a Halo x Pokemon story.

If only you knew Mewtwo...

Did just binge read this? I literally finished every chapter after I found out about this story :0

Great story.
I really enjoyed how much depth each of your characters had and how they developed through the story.

Sabaton reference

This was the greatest story I have ever read on this site. Every single character is memorable. All different. Yet at the same time, all closely related. Math. A Leader I cannot relate to but enjoyed experiencing the story with. Lucy. The best partner imaginable. Fenrir. The Simple Purple Tank with unmatched devotion. Cinder. The pokemon I for some reason can't describe properly. Fluffy. The Silent. Violent. Child with a soft spot. Phoenix. The Eevee that turned into a Jolteon. A young pure heart. And Havoc. The Gyarados who surpassed Math's every expectation by a thousand fold. And with a fighting spirit to boot.

Thanks for this glorious creation. Off to the next story.

Wait...Was Math a spelling error this whole time? I'm seeing Matt pop up a bit.

Good story, fun to read, you are an excellent writer, I would recommend trying to convey more emotions through actions and not directly saying it, other than that minor tip, it was excellent. Anyway beautiful story, keep up the good work.

"In process of a rewrite" The biggest fan of this story sayyyys... YES. Ah, it feels like forever since I checked and fanboyed over this text piece. I guess now I must do like my chihuahua and shake in excitement for future updates, good luck pal!

I’m not crying! SHUT UP! It’s THOSE DARN ONION NINJAS! xd

I found curious the part in that aerodactyl is tearing apart the forerunner war machine, because the forerunner's technology is very sturdy to the point of shrugged off a nuclear bomb in some cases and even prove can withstand a directed attack of a super MAC. Yet, aerodactyl was tearing apart this machines easily without much struggle.

But in the episode of pokemon chronicles "putting air back to aerodactyl", during the second try of team rocket to capture aerodactyl, they manage to secure aerodactyl with a mechanical hand that was clamped in its belly, and it proved be more stronger than aerodactyl, as the pokemon was incapable of remove the machine from its belly to set free itself or even tear it apart.

This make me think that is funny that aerodactyl had the brute force to tear apart easily forerunner war machine, but he is incapable of overpower a simple mechanical hand of the team rocket.

so a psychic, poison and now fire? now all he needs is a water, flying, and electric for a decent team

ok so Im reading this for the shits (halo/pokemon really?) and its not bad but 30 chapters is a lot. i was wondering if Math ever behaves more like a trainer than soldier in the future