PERCABETH4EVES

HOW DARE U LET ANNABETH ALMOST GET RAPED. CURSE YOU ON THE GODS or some curse like that lol

I was legit crying during this chapter. Are your stories always this negative?

great book loved it

Hey. I. Need. More.
Please. Make one where percy and annabeth have children and tell their stories.

Who will want to kidnap the love goddess?

It is awsome! Where did you get all the ideas?

What is Percy's curse?

I think you REALLY should write a book!

WOW SO GOOD

NO AUTHOR HOW COULD YOU

nooooooooooooooooooo WHY DID YOU MAKE MY FAVORITE SHIP FIGHT LIKE WHAT!? NO! NOBODY CAN DO THAT. But other than that lol this is pretty much my percabeth fantasies good job haha

Awesome story and percsbeth as cute as always
Your writing is very good

Best fanfiction I've literally ever read, the charectors fell like the books but with a slight twist that fits it, and the story and development feel like a multi million dollar writer

This fic is high up there when I think of OOC and nerfed characters. Percy got downgraded from being able to hold his own against gods and titans to having difficulty against a few demigods, and that’s with the Achilles curse. This is the same character that blew up a mountain and was throwing around hurricanes without being at full-power.
You also dumbed down Annabeth from being an intelligent character with a strategic mind to an overly emotional idiot who scrapes by on luck.

I don’t understand how there can be reviews of this dumpster fire stating that this ‘reads like Riordan himself wrote it’. It doesn’t. It’s a waste of time unless you’re desperately in need of a percy/annabeth fic. The few upsides would be that the plot was mostly coherent, and it’s grammatically fine for the most part.