This is a beautifully written story and is very entertaining! Writers block sucks but I’m glad you wrote this because I read it all the time! You are very talented as a writer and I hope you enjoy writing because you are really talented!

SMASHING! XD

I hope you're alive and well, we haven't heard much from you and I hope if things are getting hard that you have someone to help you through them. If it's just writer's block, well, that's a bit of a barnacle to get rid of. Anyway, hope you're okay, hopefully we'll see you soon.

Such a great story.
So excited to see where this goes

OMG please update i need this to continue!

This is a really interesting au! I love the way you've taken both if their characters and made them believable in this story. Such a clever idea, I hope you continue!

I can't help but wonder if Kaoru Will turn into a model and suprise Hikaru because You keep typing that he has a model body and features

Please post more! I'm dyinf

Please Update!

Don't mind me, I'm just re-reading this glorious piece of art for the thousandth time..:) lol
I have to say though, I'm curious as to when and if Hikaru will make an appearance? I can't imagine he'd be too pleased to find out what his little brother's been up to. I'd really love to see that confrontation.

I'm still too lazy to log in on my account so I'm sticking with Celeste.
I have a question. Is the woman Hikaru ran off with suppose to be Haruhi? Also, can you please post another chapter.

Please, please! Don't let this be like last time. Please, just give some sort of 'hey, I'm still trying to write' thing so we know you're still wrestling with the story. I apretiate that you're still writing. As a fellow author I know how tough it can be. So, thank you for not giving up on the story and I hope to read more of your work soon.

This is possibly the sweetest scene ever... I'm loving this fic so far. I really hope you continue it. _

OMG OMG OMG OMG! You updated! I want to kiss you right now I'm soooo happy! I was just about to go to bed when I realized I hadn't checked fanfiction in a while and I was telling myself not to get my hopes up as the page loaded. Then when I saw the update time, I kid you not, I let out a squeal! I love this story so much and I'm so glad that you're still writing. I was to lazy/happy to log in so the next name I'll use to review will be Celeste Wolf.

Just started reading this one and I love it! It is well written and the flow is good. It is different from other kyokau fics and a nice change of pace. Looking forward to the next installment :-)