I really like your story. I never properly considered the wind as like a spirit until I read this. It's really good. Please write more.

Wow. This is amazing. Seriously, dude.

Love this so much!

OH this is interesting! I haven't seen a female Jack quite like this before! I love the wind and sun so much! I can't wait to see what happens!

I love this story, but I wish you would make it a tad bit more clear, maybe with using line breaks. The story is magnificent

I love that bunny and Jack are friends now and I really like all of your stories

I really like that they are friends now and will they be more because I would love that!

Your work seems to be full of emotions! Do you base your writing on how you feel emotionally or do you base it on how you feel towards a topic ? Either way it is truly amazing and would love to read more of it !

I would very much like to continue reading your story, should you update it. You are very skilled at writing. I am very much looking forwad to reading more of your works.

Winds please start murdering please

PLEASE UPDATE!

Oh my quackers! Your book sounds amazing! Just let me convince my parents to buy something through the internet which will never happen...huh... Have an awesomesauce time with your book!

Just bought ur book
Haven't started reading it yet though

I'll check out the book when I can! :D

Yes. :) Man, you really made MIM the antagonist(NEW WORD!YAAY!) in this story haven't you? :) I wish good luck to Pitch to find out about the EVIL MIM and become friends with Jacqueline! HOPE TO READ MORE SOON! :)