Omg, tenten’s a slut! This was hilarious haha, great job!

Well, this was great! Fluffily hilarious, with some "almost-porn and vagina jokes" as you put it. :D
Cool though! I loved the way that you portrayed Tenten to be in charge, not the kinda snivelling pathetic girly that she is in so many fics. ;)
Good work!
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This was funny and interesting. A couple things though: Sasuke was actually in the year below Neji and Tenten. Neji was the top rookie in their year. Also, going so descriptive on the clothes Tenten's wearing doesn't really further the story. I liked how you talked about how feral her eyes looked with the makeup, though! You kept a good tone throughout the story, which was very well-written. Great job! xoxo

Hahaha! Love the horny, porny jokes and blunt humor that you gave Tenten. Great job on this!

nice, love neji way of getting her
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