| Reviews for Heated Passion |
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estelacastro0706 chapter 1 . 5/16/2019 that was so beautiful |
Fan guest chapter 1 . 11/23/2018 Love it and would be glad to take over. |
Glaceon Akuma chapter 1 . 1/18/2018 A few seals of Vehicons?,Interesing ewe. Lei la historia con Traductor,y mas bien pensaba que Soundwave seria la portadora de Stormlight. |
Meep chapter 1 . 4/30/2017 AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW (77 Ws later) ITS SO CUTE. I WAS SURE WHEN YOUR OC WAS THE CHILD OF MEGATRON AND SOUNDWAVE (Finally not Megatron and starscream, they would never be a couple honestly.) AND THE LOVER OF PREDAKING IT WAS A MARY SUE DISASTER IN THE MAKING BUT YOU PULLED IT OFF AND DIDNT MAKE IT TO WEIRD. WELL, NOT ROBOT DRAGON IMPREGNATING A ROBOT WEIRD, LIKE THE OC BEING IRRITATING OR MARY SUISH WEIRD. BUT HE WASNT A GARY STUE SO YAAAAAAY. |
Mimajo chapter 1 . 3/21/2017 Yay! Awesome story! There are some errors however, some words are in the wrong use, but this is just great! |
Wolfempress56 chapter 1 . 2/20/2017 I walk in,in my wolf form,to check on Predaking and Stormlight."Hey,guys is everything alright?""Yes,lieutenant,come and see her.""Who,s..."My voice trails off as I see the cute little one in Stormlights arms.I transform,my blue visor sliding down on my purple and red optics,my blue tail wagging back and forth from behind my hips,and my dark violet ears going to the top of my helm,which looks a lot like Megatron's minus the two spikes.I approach carefully, so as not to startle she does is just giggle at my pure white,minus the tail and ears,form."Well I'll be." She suddenly grabs my ear and studies it carefully."?"She suddenly coos and lets go,only to grab my paw like servo."Hey guys do you think she wants to...maybe see me in my wolf form?""With how she's handling you,Yes. "I transform to show her and she giggles madly when I sniff her.I look up at the two creators,saying"May I give her a ride?"" Yes,Frostbite""Come,little one,do you want a ride around the med. bay?"She quickly gets on my back."I'll take that as a yes."I trot around the med. bay carefully to make sure she didn't fall,she just giggled madly all the two creators watched me in awe,for some reason."Frostbite?""Yeah?""How do you know to be careful with Solarclaw?"I ponder on if I should tell them or not."There used to be sparklings all around my village,who all appeared to like me,so I would watch them for their creators when they were busy,and they were just angels when they were with me."They were surprised when I told them this."Frostbite,when we are too busy do you think you can watch her?""Sir,Yes,Sir!"But before I leave for my quarters,Solarclaw tells me something that warms my spark."I...Love...You!""As,do I child,as do I." |
Guest chapter 1 . 1/27/2017 This story was great, loved it so much. |
Kat chapter 1 . 10/11/2014 I LOVE this story! It's so adorable and just AAHH! It's really, really great! :D |
KohakuPrime42195 chapter 1 . 6/4/2014 Still adorable and hot as hell! |
arceeenergon chapter 1 . 12/27/2013 aaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww |
Rasha The Dark chapter 1 . 12/18/2013 Megatron going crazy because a dragon sparked his baby lol |
Guest chapter 1 . 9/25/2013 AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW WWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW WWWWWWWWWWWWWW |
Thelegofan chapter 1 . 9/24/2013 that was wow. I want to see more of this. could you wright a story continuing from this but like a few years into the future? |
UltraMagnusFanGirl chapter 1 . 9/22/2013 Looovvveeed it! |
PaleAngel90 chapter 1 . 9/22/2013 How cute :) |