i LOVE THIS SO MUCH! I LOVE PROTECTIVE ACE AND ALSO LOVE HOW YOU POINT THE ADORABLE LITTLE SUNSHINE THAT LUFFY IS I NEED MORE FANFICS THAT FOCUSES ON HOW CUTE HE IS

finally someone points out how goddamn adorable luffy is!

Perfect! I love the slightly (completely different) view point Ace has especially since it lines up perfectly with cannon. It was very well written.

This was great! So funny!

I liked it!

This was so cute~

Can't imagine if the little brother happens to be a little sister... Imagine Ace's paranoia, hahaha... I kind of like a female Luffy *lol* and the overprotective brother(s) plus the dad, gramps and Shanks as well_

So... either Ace and Nami is physic or they just somewhat share the same brain wave length.

Please do another chapter but not about something depressing like Marineford. I can't handle anything like that anymore...

AHAHAHA I LOVE IT! It's cute. And totally cannon. And I can just see it happening :DD

Cute! XD

haha, that was funny. Good job! :)

-Yvonne

Oh that was hilarious and wonderful…*bursts into laughter* Thank you.

...lol soooo zoro and sanji should keep their hands to themself lest ace having to turn them into coal XD

nice one...

I love it! I wish you write another chapter because it's simply, awesome the way Ace love Luffy ;D