I just found your story and I already love it. Your writing is so great. You are able to write each character's personality so perfectly that I can almost hear their voices when I read the story and I cannot wait to see relationships between the Chief and Cortana build when they officially meet Hanji, Erwin, Levi and the rest of the Survey Corps. Your story takes place in a time and setting during both franchises and mix them together in a way that feels natural. I pray that you will continue this story for it is already one of my favorites and one of the best on the website. Until the next update, be well and keep on writing.

This story is a very interesting and I like the direction its heading! I really want to see Chief interacting with Levi, for some reason I feel like it would be really funny. I didn't think a crossover from these two universes would turn out well, but I'm actually really hooked! I thought it was very amusing and in-character of Chief for him to just leave Hanji and just do his own thing.

Anyway I hope you're okay with the pandemic and everything, I want to read more of this story! Don't feel rushed though, I understand life can get in the way of things sometimes. Stay safe!

Update please!

Damn, still not back yet?

I mean I get it, life complicates things.

But an update would be nice.

This fic has come back and died more times than Jesus so I hope it's here to stay

This is a solid read so far. While I doubt that your going to be posting the next chapter anytime soon, would you consider copy and pasting what you already have here on the Creative Writing section for fanfics on Spacebattles? While this story doesn't suffer from a lack of attention here if you want to possibly get more feedback on your writing on SB you can respond to readers on that site in a much more effecient manner than what currently has with its review system. Not to mention that users on SB are encouraged to provide discussion and constructive criticism when it comes to stories posted there. Your choice in the end though as much as I would like to see this story on there. Good luck with your story and things in general.

Dude seriously, It's getting close to four months now without an update! I'm sure you should be well over any flu by now!

Are you still alive? My condolences if not. But if you are, and you've simply decided to abandon this fic again could you please just tell us rather then keep us waiting for months on end!

No offence, but for an aspiring author this isn't very professional of you! Any update, even just to tell us you've lost interest would be appreciated.

Anyway, I'm sorry if I've come of as rude, this is a great story and I would love an update. Take care!

Ohhh very eager to see how this meeting will play out.

Sooooo, a few weeks has transpired into almost two months. Are you alive? Or have you abandoned this fic yet again? An update would be wonderful. I am constantly checking to see if this has updated.

Wow. That's a great story! I hope that you do continue it, as it is simply amazing. I've recently been playing Halo: Reach all over again and it brought me back in the Halo universe. And what better way to go back in it than by reading a fanfic? Don't forget your love for Halo because of the recent monstrosity that is Halo 5 (even tho I have hope for Halo 6. Maybe. Bungie was a better company).

Have a nice day and stay safe!
Soltis48

So that was a lie

I've only just arrived here, but eager to see you proceed!
Very unique choice to have Dawn (appear to) disintegrate upon reentry instead of being permanently grounded like so many other stories. It does seem necessary against the Titans, particularly when you're showing Chief able to literally rip their heads off with no extreme exertion...but since you seem to be suggesting a greater threat, I'm worried about how that'll go.

It's been a few weeks now since your last update, you haven't abandoned this fic again have you? I would love another chapter to read!

How big are the people of AOT compared to the Chief? I mean, from what I'm reading it is sounding like a minor 'Honey, I Shrunk the Human Race' type thing...

Don’t let the flame die out!

-Plankton