Very unique!

Loved it!

God, her turning was the sexiest thing.

This was amazing thank you

Nice

I love this story

Oh so darn sweet love them together

Very nice. I'm glad you decided to listen to your instincts and set it on paper.

Thank you for sharing it. I do love a well-written Jasper/Bella story, no matter how brief.

It's a great fic . Congrats.

Absolutely amazing. I love it.

I actually find myself wishing it was a lot longer. On no!

Hi,
Really liked this, a nice gentle journey of 2 people destined to be together xx
Alexis

Just the best Bella/Jasper oneshot in existence.
It's not too mushy or romancy, and yet still shippy and oh so satisfying.
You captured Jasper's essence splendidly and seemingly effortlessly. Just brought to surface all those damned feelings about fictional characters, and this just feels like a balm to the soul for that.
And everyone is in character and plausible, and no Dickward (Emoward is canon and no one can or will convince me otherwise, and so I extra love this and you for going with that interpretation of Edward's character) or Malice in existence. What a sight for sore eyes. Just pure loveliness.
J'adore.

I like THIS short story

This story was really good, once you got past Jasper being a bit of a douche bag. I never really considered a Jasper and Bella relationship, but it does make sense!