Reviews for The Air That I Breathe
DayenuRose chapter 122 . 7/16
Oh wow. This story is truly epic (in both length and scope). It’s very impressive. You definitely had me hooked (I think I read through the whole thing in like a week/week and a half). And wow, it was also an epic slow burn of a romance. (Vanessa was a wonderful person and no matter how much I wanted Rogue and Gambit to get together, I couldn’t begrudge a moment spend with Vanessa).

I really appreciated Remy’s stance throughout the story about human trafficking. I get frustrated with the casual acceptance of things like strip clubs and prostitution and found Remy’s hard line against paying for sex in any form refreshing. Is the organization Vanessa worked for a real organization? Or did you model it after a real world organization?

Thank you for writing this story and sharing it. :)
Guest chapter 122 . 1/9
I've been reading this story over the last several days. I remember reading some of your other work back in like 2013 and wanted to reread them. I discovered this story and was hooked. I love your ability to tell tales and I hope you are well
RoseTintedShades chapter 1 . 1/2/2019
After rereading the recent issues of "M X" I wondered why Rogue's powers seemed so familiar to me, without any Comic to link them to... and then I realizedThat looks just like Rogue's powers in that over 800k fic I read some time ago!" To me it sounds kind of funny...
Keira-House M.D chapter 122 . 7/17/2018
After starting this story a long time ago and not managing to keep up with the new chapters posted I have finally (after years) managed to read the whole thing in its entirety. This story is absolutely wonderful, full of brilliant characterisations and amazing plot lines. I salute your writing and the immense effort it must have been to keep track of all the characters and storylines. This was an amazing read.
rolygarcor chapter 122 . 4/4/2018
This is my new favorite story. A great adventure through the ages that i recommend everyone reads. sure at times there are problems with the pacing, the story tries to do too much at once in parts. But that aptitude, that desire it to do it all, that is what makes this story great.

SOME SPOILERS NOW

The story had me in tears more than once. as characters aged and passed away i could often feel Rogue's loss. But no time had me sadder than when Vanessa died.

I went from asking myself when Rogue and Gambit would get together to wondering when Remy would dump this Vanessa girl, to agreeing with deadpool that she should get lost for the OTP, to liking her a lot and hating seeing her struggle, to crying my eyes out with her end. I have never felt so attached to an OC.

Seeing Rogue grow as well was just beautiful. There really is no better way to describe it. Seeing her extremely sad about the cure, seeing her become friends with Remy and Magneto, seeing her in Space as time moves around her and technology and ideals change, the way her suits change over time. All of it was great.

SPOILERS OVER

In conclusion, i loved the story. I wont claim its my favorite story of all times. But i will gladly say that it is better than many books I have read. I sincerely hope you keep writing because I will be reading anything you post. With this story you have made a true fan out of me.
Sam chapter 1 . 8/20/2017
HEY! So I kind of spent my past uuuuh two weeks(?) utterly immersed in reading - and rereading! - almost all of your stories (skipped on the Wolverine and the X-Men ones because I'm not that familiar with the series, YET)
... and while I have already reviewed on most with my account, I just wanted to barge in again to tell you that this story actually made me ship Rogue/Mags. Like - I've been reading and watching Marvel's stories for more than a decade now and I can quite honestly say that I did not expect that to happen. Ever. The idea never appealed to me...but you made it work, if utterly bittersweet, since there was never going to happen anything... but yea... thank you
Crowley chapter 122 . 4/29/2017
This was amazing and I Love it and you for creating it. I laughed and cried and cheered and am sad it's over but it was great. You should write something and publish.
rbear1231 chapter 122 . 4/18/2017
this was the hardest story you have written for me to read...your right it needed different 'books' it felt like to much

sorry but there was times (between chapters 62 and 73 that I got bored. well at least lost intrested.

it felt like you literly tried to put everything from all verses into one story.

by the end i learned to re love it .

ps you know they are going to f'ck gambit right?
TiamatisObscure chapter 122 . 3/15/2017
Wow. That was quite the tale. I don't think I've read a story as far reaching as this one. Well done. *polite applause*
Glorified Peace chapter 122 . 2/2/2017
Hi. This is the first time I've ever left a review on this website. I just want to let you know that this was by far the BEST fanfiction I have ever read. Rogue is my favorite x man, superhero, and whatnot and you portrayed her perfectly. I loved all the spins and advancements to powers and the inclusion of so many characters. Thanks for the great story that helped me get back into reading. You're awesome!
Guest chapter 11 . 11/29/2016
you have no idea how many times I bring myself back to this chapter. Its one of the reasons I am still alive. So thank you.
Mala chapter 52 . 11/17/2016
I know this story is finished, but I love how you are dealing with Gambit and Rogue relationship. I got to say I never would of thought I would like seeing Gambit with someone else that's not Rogue. I'm glad that Gambit has Vanessa and his son. Needless too say I'm looking forward how Rouge and Gambit get together.
AthenaMiddleFiddle chapter 114 . 8/13/2016
I LOVE YOU, I ACTUALLY LOVE YOU. PERN MOVIES, OH MY GOD, MARRY ME.
Also, you know, the entire story is really good.
Alden chapter 14 . 8/6/2016
How old is rouge so far
ashes to ashes 2 chapter 43 . 8/3/2016
I have no idea how I became this emotionally invested, but the end here was an explosion of feels. All of your writing is amazing; please tell me there is an original novel, other people need to know how to do romance this right.
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