Reviews for Trade of Innocence
enolaisa chapter 17 . 11/2/2019
Will there be more updates for this ff?
The Real Jackie-O chapter 17 . 5/24/2019
it always brightens my day when you update. im glad you didnt abandon your work! such a amazon aurther
H-Nala chapter 17 . 5/22/2019
Nice family moments.
Guest chapter 16 . 3/31/2019
Please ive been waiting forever for you to post new chapter this story has kept me unhinged since the start of it n id love for you to continue with kyoko ive come to the conclusion that she's been through so much either she has a split personality brain washed or became cruel n manipulated to live n not be abused anymore
Guest chapter 16 . 12/11/2018
Had to re-read last few chapters to refresh my memory. Can't wait to see what's coming next! :) Yayoi seriously needs a reality check and stop coddling Sho tho...

I forgot about Kanae but she's one of my least fav SB characters anyways so that's fine. She's so manipulative, selfish and self-centred (HER feelings over her friend's. It's more important to hide ALL her affection for love-starved Kyoko who's dousing her in love simply cuz too embarrassing. Very selfish esp when she knows even a sliver of showing her affecting to Kyoko would bring so much joy to Kyoko. But has no qualms pushing aside embarrassment if it's to manipulate Kyoko to do her bidding or to hear Kyoko's feelings for her. Even while knowing Kyoko’s really starved for any affection let alone love and she makes sure she doesn’t show any drop of it – only when she wants Kyoko to act a certain way, then she’ll shamelessly pretend to be hurt by Kyoko or want to do BFF things with Kyoko. Kinda funny when skimming through a manga – if you don't think too much – but in a story where readers have plenty of time to think, gets hard to ignore). Add too much whining and "Mou" and she gets annoying fast. Even though Kanae's been getting better lately, it's taken way too long and way too little. Hate seeing Kyoko fawn over her cuz Kyoko really deserves a much better friend :D Sorry, didn't mean to turn this into a Moko rant. Guess I'll refresh Moko's character when I read the whole story again but sorry just skimmed over her here cuz only re-read a few chapters XD

I'm hoping we can see Kyoko happy with Kuon's family for a while though. Story itself is very dark what with slavery and abuse and all, and it's bad with how Reino's now after her too! As well as the Boss (who thankfully if I recall, treasured her so at least she didn't seem abused but well treated…).

Anyway, thanks so much for not dropping the story!
Guest chapter 16 . 12/11/2018
OMG you're back you're back! *happy dance*

OK just had to get that out of my system cuz I'd thought this story had been abandoned...I'd been checking back till last year then kinda gave up...so I was so happy to have seen it wasn't abandoned! Thank you!

Now I'm off to enjoy the story! Thanks!
Ns chapter 16 . 11/14/2018
Pero volviste , es lo que importa ya sea años.
Erza Tsuruga chapter 16 . 8/25/2018
Wtf! This is sooooooooooooo goooood! I neeed moaaaaaar and why'd the fucking bastard of fuckster (sorry about the lingo) have to be in the pictureeeeeee I can tell he's up to no good! Maan! Update soon!
XEMblue chapter 8 . 8/8/2018
Flashbacks are important.
XEMblue chapter 7 . 8/8/2018
WOW! So, Reino ended up showing himself in front of Kyoko's door. I remember Cain and Setsu arc. That' arc is crazy.
Kyoko has a dark side.
Reino has a darker side.
Ren has the darkest side.
XEMblue chapter 6 . 8/8/2018
Okay, so I thought all this time Reino was boss, but apparently I'm wrong. I never like Miroku in the manga and anime. She was so selfish and stuck-up bish. So Kyoko is the princess? Why?
XEMblue chapter 5 . 8/8/2018
Well, my question to who Lory was speaking to over the phone was answered.
XEMblue chapter 4 . 8/8/2018
Okay, so Kyoko used to live with the Kuu family and someone claiming to be her father took her away and ended up getting killed?! WTF? Who exactly is after Kyoko? And who is Lory talking to that's got him pissed off?
XEMblue chapter 3 . 8/8/2018
WAIT... WAIT... WAIT... So Reino is not GIN? O_O
And Kyoko might have amnesia? Uh-oh.
So the stone is Iolite?
XEMblue chapter 2 . 8/8/2018
I'm glad Kyoko is going to make it. How did she get the brand on her chest?
I think Gin is a nickname for Reino since he does have silver hair, but who exactly is he working for? Who is his boss and why does the boss want Kyoko? I'm trying to figure out from the manga who exactly the boss represents but nothing comes to mind.
I'm glad you mentioned about Kuon bad habits when it comes to eating. I love how this story is coming along.
When I saw 'Corn' in the anime I thought of a tanzanite as well.
I, also, noticed you mentioned that Kyoko didn't want to go. I see you switched the parts. Awesome!
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