This is so well written, it feels like a piece of literature. good job.

I really like this fic. It had just the right amount of smut, angst, and action.

Some of the chapters are cut for me

he better fucking fix things with danny or I'll hunt his ass down

This was so amazing! Can't wait for the sequel

Omg this was so amazing! I really loved this! I can't wait to read the sequel :D

Right when you think it's over, it's not! Great story!

Wow, I’m literary blown away with this amazing fic, of yours. It’s that good, honestly. I kind of fell in love with it, which sounds a little weird, I guess, oh well, never mind…

Anyway, I more than loved the plot; it was amazing, kind of original, I think, which I really liked, btw! About the whole GTB drug plot, I mean and the bad guy was very realistic, with the whole losing his family to the werewolf bite and going to out to drugging werewolves and trying to out them. Very believable, is all I’m saying! Hats off to you!

The character portrayal and interaction was awesome and also very much in character, especially Stiles/Derek, of course! (I felt that Stiles was especially in character, almost like he's on the show, so kudos to you again, laughs.)! More so, I also really enjoyed the atmosphere throughout the story, and the pace of their relationship was very realistic and the UST was like to die for, and the dialogue was witty, which was awesome, because I’m a BIG fan of witty and sexy dialogue. And finally to the SMUT, which was in itself ONE of the BEST things in this wonderful fic of yours. It was hot, obviously and very well written and with interesting scenes, of course. I also really liked that we got glimpses from Scott and Isaac's point of view, that was very nice and refreshing.

The only negative things, that I found; were and note, they’re minor; the lack of commas, some sentences were a bit long and needed more commas in them, it’s nothing really that needs to be fixed, but maybe just a reminder for the future. However what was a bit more noticeable was the lack of scene breaks throughout the story, except for the last few chapters, which was very nicely done, of course!

You probably already know this, but when you switch to a different time and/or place and/or character's point of view, you should always put in a scene break, that way it gets a little easier to read and whatnot. Not that it was difficult to read your fic, (it so wasn’t)! I’m just a little bit of a “nitpicker” (a nicer way to put it, would probably be to say that I’m very much a perfectionist, which can be very annoying, especially to myself), I guess, especially when it comes to writing, oh well, never mind…), but it kind of stood out to me (I kind of missed them), sorry if it offends you, it was not my intention!

And now, I’m done, I think, ouch, this got a lot longer than I thought it would, oh well! Overall it was a very well written and well composed story, which the BEST stories often are! BIG kudos to you and thanks for sharing!

I loved how in the earlier chapters Derek was straining himself to keep in control and the chase and fight scenes were so epic but still fairly realistic which is always amazing. And Ray was just so real and then when Stiles is thinking oh my god if Derek kills him and his dad comes that his dad is going to turn into another Ray was just so... I do not even know how to describe other than that the hair on the back of my neck stood on end and I thought that is so true he would. And I am so glad that Peter took care of him. Then how Stiles' dad walks in at the end was just like epic timing on his part. I loved the ending; its so sweet and sexy. I really kept expecting Stiles' dad to walk in at any minute and catch them but I'm kind glad he did not. YAY more sexy time! But the IMing thing totally leaves me with the feeling that there is and should be sequel. I really hope you post more here or if you post on other sites I would love to know and read your work there. Thanks for writing!

Oh my god that was so hot. The way that Stiles and Derek taunt each other is just so spectacularly them. The writing style is so... it just gets everything across without being too much or too little. And I love how we get to see how they view each other with the double first person. I cannot wait to finish reading this tomorrow. It's been the highlight of my day.

I enjoyed your story even if I didn't get why the werewolf that can't get diseases would wear a condom to have sex with Stiles, a virgin. Great plot. Great characterization.

Really exciting few chapters!

This was a really great chapter.

A very amusing first chapter, but I'm sure you know that by now!

Wow! Well that worked out for everyone, though I don't think Stiles can stay human forever, unless something about him makes him immune, like maybe being a Witch or something. I guess only time will tell.