Awesome!

That was amazing

Honestly I tend to avoid fics with all 4 bc I always thought that they'd be confusing , but yours proved me wrong

The story of my s getting interesting , looking forward to how you plan to finish it

Thanks for updating!

The story is great. As for the grammar errors, the 0nly thing you really need is either a beta or a spellchecker, as you seem to make a few typos.

Cool.