Good story, I hope you continue, it's great. Greetings. bye!

I don't like this at all... It's a great story and I hope you start writing on it again... I'm just really not sure about actually killing her off

You can’t leave this where it is at please continue writing

NOT ASUNA! Kirito is gonna kill a mother fucker i can see it now. Lol. But seriously not cool bro. I love asuna.

When you keep reading tricking yourself that the grammar will eventually get better but it don't x.x...

This game not having that function of self-protection that SAO had (which allow the user to send another player to the prison if they forcefully invaded their personal space) makes it a pretty dangerous game. For the women, at least.

I got a little confused with the last scene. Is PoH the leader of the thugs who got his ass handed to him by Kirito? How he went from a small fry to having a "sinister intent" and become someone not to be messed with?

I see, so there's no classes. I thought Naruto was a knight when he used [Bash], but that's alright.

I'm just a tiny bit disappointed since I was totally hoping that Hinata would be a monk, however. She Asura-ing the bosses' asses would be marvelous.

Since Kushina always thought about Kazuto as a second son, I get that Midori was there, but I think she should have talked with him too and not only with Naruto.

Hahaha, oh my God! Terms and conditions. That was genial!

Though not really acceptable in reality, since most of the people in the game are underage (?) so they don't have the capability to legally accept any kind of contract. But whatever, I also didn't study laws, and this is a fanfic so it's doesn't matter.

The story looks interesting. But I wonder how you're going to deal with things being finite in the game. Since Ragnarok is all about killing again and again the same mob to drop things. And the bosses (or MVP, as we call) most likely will not respawn after being killed, so they'll likely drop unique items which will never have a second set.

Is there going to have classes in the story? If so, he'll probably be a ninja, but I think Naruto would be a better fit as an assassin. I don't know, ninja is cool and all, but he just loses badly against the transclasses.

well its been 2 years any chance of an update?

dude, I just read this from beginning to this chapter, and it is well written. there's a few grammar errors, but it's a great story. keep up the good work. and don't rush chapters because other's want them sooner. till next time.

COMPLETE DICK MOVE!

What the heck was that man?!

Don't turn kirito into an emo sasuke

love the story please update

New reader here. Binge read the whole thing in two days. So this last chapter, I have a problem. Not necessarily that you killed Asuna, though it hurts me knowing how much she and Kirito depend on each other. My problem is I fail to see how you are gonna make the Yui thing you mentioned come true if Asuna is dead now. Maybe you overlooked that? Or maybe you have a surprise coming up and it's all psychological. Either way, great story. And if you still need someone to clean up your grammar, I'm willing to.