Reviews for Bath Time
Guest chapter 1 . 10/19/2017
Vanessa Papillon Moments
. ‘ What is ‘yo?'' naive Blue eyes peered curiously after Billy and Buck exchanged a rather unfamiliar greeting ‘ It means hi in American. The French say Salut. We high five each other and say yo. ’ ‘ How fascinating, ’ her velvety voice cooed.
. Arabesque. Jete. Pile. Vanessa tried very hard to remember the technical terms her dance teacher always told her. Now, ballerina, Vanessa did not care anymore. She had danced as Juliet, Salome, Portia, yet she wanted more she wanted Swan Lake.
. ‘ Mother, ’ Vanessa huffed as she puffed he last bits of sparkly eyeshadow to her rosy eyelids and grabbed her bag ‘ I am 18 and I can make decisions myself. Merci. Ignoring her mother's glare, she hopped on her car with Yasmin and drive off. '
. ' Uh- actually I am not fully French. ’ Vanessa confessed sheepishly ‘ My father is a Swedish detective. ’ ‘ Hercule Papillon?' Billy grinned hysterically ' I love him since I was a little boy- I read his articles!’
. The most advanced, crucial part of film study is to study the art of silent films- the most advanced ones. None of the stars really cared. They sleep at the first scene. But when they see Vanessa memorizing the dance scenes in the first Great Gatsby silent film, they all wondered what makes her .
BloodiedCoreOfHope chapter 1 . 12/11/2016
:) A smooth development into Ectofeature. I like it! This made me smile a ton. Did you know there's a comic of the bath argument somewhere?
That One Person chapter 1 . 4/25/2015
:3 Bromosexuals...
Guest chapter 1 . 1/18/2015
Cute.
FortuneSmeller chapter 1 . 8/24/2014
i actually snorted at bromosexuals oh my god the worst pun ever and i snorted
Kloudmax chapter 1 . 6/17/2014
Omg that was so funny/cute! I loved it!
Guest chapter 1 . 5/26/2014
I love it!
Bromosexuals x'D
Nice one-shot! 3
Sepulvedlore chapter 1 . 5/14/2014
omg I loved it xD and i laughted so much!
buslimpan chapter 1 . 5/6/2014
Great story!
snoopy chapter 1 . 4/1/2014
bromosexuals. made my day.
Naturestune chapter 1 . 3/22/2014
Haha, Bromosexuals. That was a good one.
quivershiver chapter 1 . 3/10/2014
B - E - A - UTIFUL.
Loved it! I seriously need more ectofeature from you. I need it like I need oxygen.
arekulovesyaoi chapter 1 . 10/21/2013
omfg i love it \(*-*\)
Mina chapter 1 . 9/22/2013
OMG! I love it! So damn cute.
I love you for writing such a bromantic story like that. Is so adorable.
xoxo
Guest chapter 1 . 9/21/2013
I fucking love your humor, holy shit